Computers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为简单且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和冗余，同时注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I use a computer whenever I need to write a dissertation or edit a short video because these tasks are difficult to do on a smartphone.

Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性，语法错误较多，句子不完整。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和主谓一致。

Ví dụ: I first used a computer in primary school when our school offered a Photoshop class. Every student had to learn how to use Photoshop on the computer, so we spent time practicing during class.

Gợi ý: 表达不够准确，存在重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并正确使用单复数和冠词。

Ví dụ: I think life without a computer would be very difficult because writing academic papers and using useful applications like Adobe and Microsoft Office would be impossible.

Gợi ý: 表达重复且不够连贯，语法错误较多。建议使用更简洁的句子，避免重复，并注意冠词和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: It would be difficult to use a computer without an Internet connection because many tasks require online access.

× Every time I have to write dissertation or edit a short video I will use computer because these kind of things I can't do it using my smartphones.

✓ Every time I have to write a dissertation or edit a short video, I will use a computer because these kinds of things I can't do using my smartphone.

名词单复数使用错误。dissertation前应加不定冠词a，computer前应加不定冠词a，kind应使用复数形式kinds，smartphones应为单数形式smartphone。

× Our school has a Photoshop class. So every student have to learn how to use Photoshop at computer.

✓ Our school has a Photoshop class. So every student has to learn how to use Photoshop on a computer.

主谓一致错误。every student是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式has。

× So every student have to learn how to use Photoshop at computer.

✓ So every student has to learn how to use Photoshop on a computer.

介词使用错误。表示使用电脑时应使用介词on，而不是at。

× I remember first time I used a computer.

✓ I remember the first time I used a computer.

缺少定冠词the，表示特指第一次使用电脑的时间。

× So at that time we will take to learn and use computer.

✓ So at that time we would learn and use the computer.

句子结构错误，时态和表达不自然。应使用过去时would表示过去习惯，且computer前应加定冠词the。

× because the Adobe and Office those those applications is really useful.

✓ because Adobe and Office, those applications are really useful.

主谓一致错误。applications为复数，谓语动词应使用are。去掉the，Adobe和Office作为软件名称不需要冠词。

× So every student have to learn how to use Photoshop at computer.

✓ So every student has to learn how to use Photoshop on a computer.

介词使用错误，表示使用电脑时应使用on，而不是at。

× because these kind of things I can't do it using my smartphones.

✓ because these kinds of things I can't do using my smartphone.

代词使用错误，不能同时使用these kinds of things和it，应去掉it。

× I think it must be the conditions that they don't have any Internet.

✓ I think it must be the condition that they don't have any Internet.

条件condition应为单数，表示一种情况。

× I think Internet is the essential conditions that to use a computer without Internet, you can't do any, you can't do anything.

✓ I think Internet is the essential condition; to use a computer without Internet, you can't do anything.

条件condition应为单数，且句子结构不完整，需分号连接。