Talents— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは簡潔に質問に直接答えていますが、文法ミス、語順の誤り、不自然な表現が多く、内容の具体性や接続語の使用が不足しています。まずは主語・動詞の一致や冠詞、前置詞の正しい使用を練習し、短く明確なトピック文（I don't consider myself talented, but...）を作ってから、努力や根拠を示す1〜2文の支持文を接続詞（because, so, therefore）でつなげてください。発音や流暢さも改善が必要です。

Ví dụ: I don't consider myself particularly talented, but I work very hard. Because I practice consistently and learn from feedback, I have improved steadily and achieved several personal goals.

Gợi ý: 質問の意味を取り違えている可能性が高く、文が不明瞭で内容が整理されていません。まず質問は『それを最近習得したか、子供の頃か』と過去の時期を尋ねています。時制に注意して、直接的に時期を示す文（I learned it when I was young / I developed it recently）を言い、その理由をbecauseで続けてください。余分な表現は避け、文を短く保ちましょう。

Ví dụ: I developed that skill when I was young because my parents encouraged me to be honest and calm. As a result, I practiced listening and self-control from an early age.

Gợi ý: 肯定はしていますが、理由の表現が冗長で文法的に混乱しています。論理的に理由を一つか二つに絞り、becauseやsoを使ってつなぎ、具体的な職業や場面の例を示すと説得力が増します。語彙はシンプルで正確に（listen carefully, be humble, consider others' opinions）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe so. Being able to listen carefully and consider others' opinions is important in any workplace, for example when collaborating on projects or managing a team.

Gợi ý: 答えは分かりやすく家族を挙げていますが、文法、語順、語彙の選択に問題があります。比較表現や具体例を加えると良いでしょう。接続語（for example, because, therefore）で理由を明確にし、'leadership'や'create a shared opinion'などの語句を正しい形で使ってください。

Ví dụ: Yes. My mother shares this skill — she always listens to other people's opinions carefully before making a decision. For example, at family meetings she encourages everyone to speak so they can reach a shared conclusion.

× No, I don't. I'm not have a confidence on my talent.

✓ No, I don't. I don't have confidence in my talent.

Subject uses incorrect verb form and pronoun structure: 'I'm not have' is wrong; use 'I don't have'. Also 'a confidence' is incorrect; 'confidence' is uncountable so no article. Preposition 'on' should be 'in'. Suggestion: use 'I don't have confidence in my talent.'

× I am totally worked hard and.

✓ I have worked very hard.

Mixes present 'am' with past participle 'worked'. Use present perfect 'have worked' to show past effort affecting present. 'Totally' is awkward here; 'very' is more natural and remove trailing 'and'.

× My current situation is succeed by my continuous effort, I believe.

✓ My current situation is the result of my continuous effort, I believe.

Incorrect verb form 'succeed' used as adjective; use noun phrase 'the result of' to express cause. 'Succeed by' is wrong. Suggestion: 'My current situation is the result of my continuous effort.'

× He was muscle while I was young because my parents always taught me that I should be honest and more.

✓ I was muscular when I was young because my parents always taught me that I should be honest and so on.

'He was muscle' has wrong pronoun and incorrect noun 'muscle'; should be 'I was muscular'. 'While' is acceptable but 'when' is more natural. 'More' is vague; 'so on' or 'other qualities' clarifies. Ensure subject matches speaker.

× A delightful to be calm.

✓ It was delightful to be calm.

Sentence lacks subject and proper structure. Add pronoun 'It' and verb 'was' to form a complete sentence. 'Delightful' is adjective describing state.

× Yes I do, my current I'd say is the result of my effort will be meaningful and useful in actual society because to listen to carefully to others opinion and be humble to others opinion inspiration.

✓ Yes I do. I would say my current situation, which is the result of my effort, will be meaningful and useful in society because I listen carefully to others' opinions and am humble and inspired by them.

Original has run-on structure and incorrect modals. 'I'd say' should be 'I would say' and needs punctuation. 'Actual society' is unnatural; use 'society'. 'To listen to carefully to others opinion' has incorrect infinitive and extra 'to'; use 'I listen carefully to others' opinions'. Possessive apostrophe needed for 'others'. 'Be humble to others opinion inspiration' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'am humble and inspired by them.'

× Yes I do, especially my mother has the same skill as me.

✓ Yes. My mother especially has the same skill as I do.

Sentence needs punctuation and clearer pronoun case: 'as me' is acceptable in speech but formal writing prefers 'as I do'. Also 'Yes I do' should be separate response. 'Especially' better placed before subject.

× My mother always tries to listen others to the others opinions carefully before reaching A conclusion.

✓ My mother always tries to listen to others' opinions carefully before reaching a conclusion.

'Listen' requires 'to' before the object. 'The others opinions' should be 'others' opinions' with possessive apostrophe and no article 'the'. 'A conclusion' should be lowercase 'a conclusion'. Remove extra 'to'.

× So highline their leadership is not just make quick answers but creating shared opinion.

✓ She highlights that leadership is not just about making quick decisions but about creating shared opinions.

Original mixes forms and has incorrect verb patterns. 'Highline' is wrong; use 'highlights'. 'Is not just make' needs 'is not just about making'. 'Quick answers' better as 'quick decisions'. 'Creating shared opinion' should be 'creating shared opinions' or 'a shared opinion'. Rephrase for clarity.