Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief specific reason and a short example. Use correct tense and concise phrasing (avoid redundancy).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy drawing because it helps me relieve stress. For example, when I feel down I often sketch for 20–30 minutes, and it calms me and clears my mind.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and vocabulary, and be specific about how galleries help you. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler or unclear phrases. Keep it within a few sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries because they broaden my horizons. For instance, seeing different masterpieces inspires new ideas and helps me understand various artistic styles.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and word choice, and make the response more personal and specific. State your intention clearly, then give one clear reason with an example. Avoid sweeping statements about everyone unless you qualify them.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, I want to learn more about art because it develops my creativity. For example, taking a short course in modern painting improved my ability to experiment with colour and composition.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and provide a bit more detail about your experience. Start with a direct answer, then add a specific detail (when, what, how it affected you).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child my mother enrolled me in oil painting classes, and I enjoyed learning basic techniques like mixing colours and using brushes.

× Yes, I like drawing because it makes me alleviate stress when I was down.

✓ Yes, I like drawing because it helps me relieve stress when I am feeling down.

Mixed tenses and incorrect verb choice: 'makes me alleviate' is unnatural and ungrammatical. Use 'helps me relieve' or 'helps relieve' to express that drawing reduces stress. Also 'when I was down' refers to past; the context is general, so use present continuous 'when I am feeling down.' Suggestion: use 'helps me relieve stress' and 'when I am feeling down' for correct meaning and tense consistency.

× Yes, I like to go to the gallery because it might mean bro broaden my horizon when I saw a lot of masterpiece.

✓ Yes, I like to go to the gallery because it helps broaden my horizons when I see many masterpieces.

Multiple errors: 'might mean bro' is incorrect and likely a typo; remove 'might mean bro.' 'Broaden my horizon' should be 'broaden my horizons' (plural). Tense consistency: 'when I saw' is past but the general statement needs present simple 'when I see.' 'A lot of masterpiece' should be 'many masterpieces' (countable plural). Use 'helps broaden' to express cause and general truth.

× Absolutely, and I think everyone need to do that.

✓ Absolutely, and I think everyone needs to do that.

Subject-verb agreement/present tense: 'everyone' is singular and requires the third-person singular verb form 'needs.' Replace 'need' with 'needs.' This keeps the present-tense general statement correct.

× Learning arms make everyone cultivate their creativity and improve the society's imagination.

✓ Learning art helps everyone cultivate their creativity and expand society's imagination.

Several errors: 'Learning arms' is a vocabulary mistake; use 'Learning art.' Subject-verb agreement: 'make everyone' should be 'helps everyone' or 'helps to make everyone' because 'learning art' is singular. 'Cultivate their creativity' is fine, but 'improve the society's imagination' is awkward—use 'expand society's imagination.' Use 'helps' to link the subject and effects. Also 'society's imagination' without 'the' sounds more natural here.

× Yes, when I was young my mom asked me to learning oil painting and I enjoy that.

✓ Yes, when I was young my mom asked me to learn oil painting and I enjoyed it.

Incorrect verb form after 'asked me to': the infinitive 'to learn' is required, not 'to learning.' Tense inconsistency: the time frame is past ('when I was young'), so use past tense 'I enjoyed it' rather than present 'I enjoy that.' Also 'that' is vague; 'it' refers clearly to oil painting.