Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có sự lặp từ không cần thiết, ví dụ như "assigned me with do include some drawing in in it". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: No, I don't really like drawing, but sometimes I have to do it for school assignments.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý đến sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc trong câu trả lời. Câu "because I have" không rõ nghĩa và làm câu bị gián đoạn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ví dụ: I've never been to a gallery before, but I think I would enjoy it because it offers a chance to experience new cultures and ideas from great artists.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không chính xác, ví dụ như "Why I generally don't like drawing?" và "like in strictly related". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Although I don't like drawing, I would love to learn more about art because it is closely related to my passion for music.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như "like" và "kind of" trong bài thi IELTS. Hãy sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn để tăng tính chuyên nghiệp.

Ví dụ: I didn't attend any formal drawing classes as a child, but I practiced drawing simple 3D objects on my own before stopping when it came to more complex subjects like human anatomy.

× Generally, no, I don't like drawing at all, but sometimes the assignments and the work that the teacher assigned me with do include some drawing in in it, and I'm forced to draw sometimes.

✓ Generally, no, I don't like drawing at all, but sometimes the assignments and the work that the teacher assigned me do include some drawing in it, and I'm forced to draw sometimes.

The phrase 'assigned me with' is incorrect. The verb 'assign' is transitive and does not require the preposition 'with' after the indirect object. The correct form is 'assigned me'. Also, the repetition 'in in it' is a typographical error and should be corrected to 'in it'.

× I've never been to a gallery before, but I think that I would love the experience because I have. I get to experience new things and new culture, new scopes of thoughts from other great artists and like great figures overall.

✓ I've never been to a gallery before, but I think that I would love the experience because I get to experience new things and new cultures, new scopes of thought from other great artists and great figures overall.

The phrase 'because I have' is incomplete and unclear in this context and should be removed. 'New culture' should be pluralized to 'new cultures' to match the plural 'new things'. 'Scopes of thoughts' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'scopes of thought' as 'thought' is uncountable here. The word 'like' before 'great figures' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× Why I generally don't like drawing? I would definitely love to learn more about arts, especially because it is a subject that is like in strictly related to my passion which is music.

✓ Although I generally don't like drawing, I would definitely love to learn more about art, especially because it is a subject that is strictly related to my passion, which is music.

The question 'Why I generally don't like drawing?' is incorrectly structured; it should be a statement or rephrased as a question. 'Arts' should be singular 'art' when referring to the subject. The phrase 'like in strictly related' is incorrect; it should be 'strictly related'. Also, a comma is needed before 'which is music' to separate the clause.

× I was not participating in any classes that specialize in drawing, but I used to try to draw on my own.

✓ I did not participate in any classes that specialized in drawing, but I used to try to draw on my own.

The past continuous 'was not participating' is not appropriate here; simple past 'did not participate' is better to express a completed action in the past. 'Specialize' should be in past tense 'specialized' to match the past time frame.

× I started off with like simple 3D objects and then I just kind of stopped at some points when it comes to drawing, like real anatomy.

✓ I started off with simple 3D objects and then I kind of stopped at some point when it came to drawing real anatomy.

The filler word 'like' is unnecessary and informal in this context and should be removed. 'At some points' should be singular 'at some point' to indicate an unspecified time. 'When it comes to' should be changed to past tense 'when it came to' to maintain past tense consistency.