Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but try to avoid filler words like 'UMM' and reduce repetition such as 'really' and 'passionate about drawing' twice. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy drawing and painting a lot. Since childhood, I have attended art classes and joined the children's art club at my school. Moreover, my teachers have always appreciated my work, which motivates me to improve further. Drawing fascinates me because it allows me to express my creativity and helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your answer more concise. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'however' to connect contrasting ideas clearly. Also, be careful with sentence length to keep it natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I don't usually like going to galleries because I find it hard to understand the artwork without a guide. However, during a school trip, I visited a gallery displaying paintings by famous Bangladeshi scientists, which I found interesting as it helped me understand their perspectives.

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar, for example, 'not really encourage' should be 'not only encourages'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'not only... but also' correctly to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am passionate about art and want to learn more about the background of artworks because it helps me understand the artist's intentions and cultural context. This knowledge not only encourages me to think creatively but also motivates me to appreciate art from new perspectives.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating words like 'I' twice and correct phrases such as 'favorites subjects' to 'favorite subjects'. Also, try to use linking words like 'especially' and 'but' properly to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned drawing as a child. Especially during school, I often participated in art competitions because I enjoyed drawing. I used to gift my drawings to family and friends, which made me proud. My favorite subjects were natural scenes like trees and rivers, but sometimes I also liked drawing animals.

× This knowledge not really encourage encourages me to think creatively but also motivates me to appreciate art from new perspectives.

✓ This knowledge not only encourages me to think creatively but also motivates me to appreciate art from new perspectives.

The original sentence misses the auxiliary 'only' after 'not' to correctly form the correlative conjunction 'not only... but also'. Also, 'encourage' should be in third person singular form 'encourages' to agree with the singular subject 'knowledge'. The corrected sentence uses 'not only encourages' to properly express the intended meaning.

× My favorites subjects to draw were natural sceneries like trees and rivers, but sometimes I also liked growing animals.

✓ My favorite subjects to draw were natural scenes like trees and rivers, but sometimes I also liked growing animals.

The word 'favorites' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'favorite' without 's'. Also, 'sceneries' is rarely used in plural; 'scenes' is more appropriate. The corrected sentence uses 'favorite subjects' and 'natural scenes' to properly express plurality and adjective form.