Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了对绘画的热爱，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构有些混乱。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really love drawing. I have been practicing since I was 12 years old, and I enjoy sketching objects from real life because it helps me improve my skills. Drawing is a very relaxing hobby for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，并且明确表达原因和频率。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the gallery twice a week because it inspires me and I can learn new skills from the artists' works.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复和口头语。

Ví dụ: Absolutely, I want to learn more about art because I love it. I am very patient when it comes to painting, and in the future, I hope to become a professional artist.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态和句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达过去和现在的情况。

Ví dụ: Yes, I started learning to draw when I was 12 years old. At that time, drawing was difficult for me, but now that I am older, my skills have become much more stable.

× I have been practicing since I was about 12 years ago and I enjoy catching sketching objects from real life because it helps me improve my skill.

✓ I have been practicing since I was about 12 years old, and I enjoy sketching objects from real life because it helps me improve my skills.

这里“since I was about 12 years ago”时态和表达不正确，应改为“since I was about 12 years old”，表示从12岁开始。并且“catching sketching”表达不当，应去掉“catching”，只用“sketching”。“skill”应为复数“skills”，因为通常指多项技能。

× Drawing is really is relaxing hobby that.

✓ Drawing is really a relaxing hobby.

句子中“is really is relaxing hobby that”结构混乱，缺少冠词“a”，且“that”多余，应删去。正确表达为“Drawing is really a relaxing hobby.”

× MMM I think I, I am umm I often go to the gallery 1 twice a week and I read because and it was inspire me and I can learn some skills from the artist.

✓ I think I often go to the gallery twice a week because it inspires me and I can learn some skills from the artists.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的“1”和“read”，动词时态和主谓一致错误，“inspire”应为第三人称单数“inspires”，且“artist”应为复数“artists”。

× Umm, I think absolutely yes, because I really love art, I am really full of patient to art and in the future I really want be a artist about umm painting so.

✓ I think absolutely yes, because I really love art. I am really patient with art, and in the future I really want to be an artist in painting.

“full of patient”表达错误，应为“patient with”。“want be”缺少不定式“to”，应为“want to be”。“a artist”前冠词错误，应为“an artist”。“about umm painting so”表达不清，改为“in painting”。

× Yes, I have been enjoying things from 12 years old and was I was a young kid and I and that time I think drawing it was difficult for me.

✓ Yes, I have been enjoying drawing since I was 12 years old. When I was a young kid, I thought drawing was difficult for me.

“have been enjoying things from 12 years old”表达不准确，应为“have been enjoying drawing since I was 12 years old”。“was I was a young kid and I and that time”结构混乱，应拆分为两句。

× But now I'm grow up and the skill I'm more and more stable.

✓ But now I've grown up and my skills are more and more stable.

“I'm grow up”时态错误，应为现在完成时“I've grown up”。“the skill I'm more and more stable”主谓不一致，应为“my skills are more and more stable”。