Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and expresses your feelings well, but try to avoid informal phrases like "you know?" and be more concise. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy drawing because it allows me to express my emotions and relax. Although I am not very skilled, I find it a helpful way to recharge after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some vocabulary errors and unclear expressions such as "say different pictures" and "like a real world." Try to use correct vocabulary and link your ideas clearly. Also, provide specific reasons for your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries because it is a great experience to see various paintings and artworks. Even if I don't always understand their meaning, I appreciate the creativity and atmosphere they create.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains repetition and grammar mistakes. Try to organise your ideas clearly with linking words and avoid repeating phrases. Also, be specific about how you plan to learn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely want to learn more about painting because I am interested in art. I plan to explore beautiful artworks and expand my knowledge by studying online courses on my iPad.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid fragmented sentences and provide a complete response with clear structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about your learning experience.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a child, I bought a sketchbook and learned drawing by reading books. I think I improved a lot because I still remember some of the pictures I drew looked quite good.

× Definitely because it's a greater experience to say different pictures and artworks.

✓ Definitely because it's a great experience to see different pictures and artworks.

The preposition 'say' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'see' when referring to looking at pictures and artworks. Also, 'greater' should be 'great' to correctly describe the experience.

× Though I don't understand what they are expressing, I still like to say it.

✓ Though I don't understand what they are expressing, I still like to see it.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used when referring to viewing artworks; the correct verb is 'see'.

× It's like a real world.

✓ It's like a real world.

The sentence is grammatically correct; however, 'a real world' is acceptable if referring to a metaphorical or specific context. No correction needed.

× For sure I want to learn more about painting because I'm interested it's I'm interested in it.

✓ For sure I want to learn more about painting because I'm interested in it.

The phrase 'it's I'm interested in it' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'I'm interested in it'.

× I want to look more beautiful pictures and explore new world.

✓ I want to look at more beautiful pictures and explore a new world.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to viewing pictures. Also, 'new world' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× I definitely will read in the future because I have a iPad, I could learn it online.

✓ I will definitely learn in the future because I have an iPad; I can learn online.

The modal verb 'could' is used incorrectly here; 'can' is more appropriate for ability. Also, 'read' is incorrect in this context; 'learn' fits better. The article 'a' before 'iPad' should be 'an' because 'iPad' starts with a vowel sound.

× Yes, I at that time I bought a sketchbook and I just learned by reading the book I did.

✓ Yes, at that time I bought a sketchbook and learned by reading the book.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('I did'). Removing 'I did' and rearranging improves clarity and correctness.

× I did great at that time because I still remember the picture looked great and beautiful, but.

✓ I did great at that time because I still remember the picture looked great and beautiful.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'but' without completing the thought. Removing 'but' completes the sentence properly.