Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is enthusiastic but a bit repetitive and slightly off-topic with 'painting' at the end. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy drawing because it allows me to express my creativity. For example, when I was a child, I drew pictures of my parents, which they appreciated a lot. This early encouragement made me love drawing even more.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but lacks clarity and completeness. Avoid vague words like 'umpteen' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy visiting art galleries because they display many different artworks created by various artists. Recently, I visited a gallery to learn new techniques and get inspired by creative pieces, which helped me improve my own skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words. Be specific about what you want to learn and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely want to learn more about art because artists need to continuously improve their skills and knowledge. For instance, learning new techniques and styles can help me create better artworks and develop fresh ideas.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear information. Also, the claim about a Nobel Prize seems unlikely and may confuse the examiner. Be honest and clear, and provide relevant details with proper linking.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned drawing as a child because I have always enjoyed it. For example, I created a drawing promoting the message 'Save girls, save environment,' which was appreciated by my school teachers.

× I have made a picture of my mother and father and all praised me for that.

✓ I made a picture of my mother and father and everyone praised me for that.

The present perfect tense 'have made' is incorrectly used here because the action happened at a specific time in the past (childhood). The simple past 'made' is appropriate. Also, 'all' should be 'everyone' to refer to people praising.

× I always love to go to the gallery because there are umpteen pictures or art that an artist had made.

✓ I always love going to the gallery because there are umpteen pictures or artworks that artists have made.

The phrase 'love to go' is less natural than 'love going' when expressing habitual actions. Also, 'art' should be 'artworks' to refer to multiple pieces. 'Had made' is past perfect, which is incorrect here; 'have made' (present perfect) is appropriate to indicate artworks existing now.

× Different type of artworks are.

✓ There are different types of artworks.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'There are' and pluralizing 'type' to 'types' corrects the sentence structure.

× learning an art is very important

✓ learning art is very important

The article 'an' is unnecessary before 'art' when referring to art in general. Removing 'an' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× an artist has no proper knowledge about everything, so I want to learn everything about the art and artist plays a great role in their whole life as creating new skills and ideas.

✓ an artist does not have proper knowledge about everything, so I want to learn everything about art, and artists play a great role in their whole life by creating new skills and ideas.

The sentence has pronoun and subject-verb agreement issues. 'An artist has no' is better as 'does not have'. 'The art' should be 'art' without 'the'. 'Artist plays' should be 'artists play' to agree with plural pronoun 'their'. Also, 'as creating' should be 'by creating' for correct preposition use.

× I have learned drawing when I was a kid because I'm very fond of drawing as well as painting.

✓ I learned drawing when I was a kid because I'm very fond of drawing as well as painting.

The present perfect 'have learned' is incorrect with the specific past time 'when I was a kid'. The simple past 'learned' is appropriate.

× I have, I had got a Nobel Prize from Mr. Narendra Modi for an art that I have made on girls as save girls and save environment.

✓ I got a Nobel Prize from Mr. Narendra Modi for an artwork that I made on 'Save Girls and Save Environment'.

The phrase 'I have, I had got' is incorrect and redundant. Simple past 'got' is correct. 'An art' should be 'an artwork'. 'I have made' should be simple past 'I made' because the action is completed in the past. Also, the title of the artwork should be in quotes for clarity.