Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and use the correct tense consistently. Also, make your answer more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details. For example, say 'Yes, I really enjoy drawing, especially sketching portraits because it helps me capture people's emotions and expressions.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy drawing, especially sketching portraits because it helps me capture people's emotions and expressions.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Make your answer more coherent by directly answering the question and explaining your preference with linking words. For example, 'Not really, I prefer spending time at home. However, I sometimes explore art on Facebook and other platforms because I find it fascinating.'

Ví dụ: Not really, I prefer spending time at home. However, I sometimes explore art on Facebook and other platforms because I find it fascinating.

Gợi ý: Reduce filler words and clarify your points. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'Yes, definitely. Learning more about art helps me develop creativity, and it also allows me to express different feelings and emotions through painting.'

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Learning more about art helps me develop creativity, and it also allows me to express different feelings and emotions through painting.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Make your answer more precise and structured. For example, 'Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I attended drawing classes that helped me develop my creativity and concentration.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I attended drawing classes that helped me develop my creativity and concentration.

× Yes, I really enjoyed drawing umm.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy drawing.

The question is in the present tense 'Do you like drawing?', so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'enjoyed' (past tense) is incorrect here; 'enjoy' (present tense) is appropriate.

× Whenever I have some time I umm started to art umm, particularly umm sketching portraits of people umm because it helps me to capture their emotion and expressions.

✓ Whenever I have some time, I start to do art, particularly sketching portraits of people, because it helps me to capture their emotions and expressions.

The phrase 'I umm started' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'I start' is correct. Also, 'started to art' is incorrect; 'start to do art' or 'start art' is better. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'expressions'.

× because it helps me to capture their emotion and expressions.

✓ because it helps me to capture their emotions and expressions.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to agree with the plural 'expressions' and to correctly refer to multiple feelings.

× Not really, I love to spend my times in my home umm but on.

✓ Not really, I love to spend my time at home.

The phrase 'my times' is incorrect; 'my time' is the correct singular form when referring to free time. Also, 'in my home' is better expressed as 'at home' in this context.

× However I sometimes umm was at at in umm Facebook or other platforms.

✓ However, I sometimes am on Facebook or other platforms.

The phrase 'I sometimes was' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual present action, so present tense 'I sometimes am' is correct. Also, the preposition 'at at in' is incorrect; 'on' is the correct preposition for platforms like Facebook.

× However I sometimes umm was at at in umm Facebook or other platforms.

✓ However, I sometimes am on Facebook or other platforms.

The prepositions 'at at in' are incorrect and redundant. The correct preposition to use with online platforms like Facebook is 'on'.

× I find it really fascinating towards it.

✓ I find it really fascinating.

The phrase 'fascinating towards it' is incorrect. 'Fascinating' is an adjective that does not require the preposition 'towards' or the pronoun 'it' after it.

× because artful helps to umm, gain creativity and umm, and they can also uh, have to capture other feelings and emotions through painting.

✓ because art helps to gain creativity, and it can also capture other feelings and emotions through painting.

The word 'artful' is incorrect here; 'art' is the correct noun. The pronoun 'they' is incorrect when referring to 'art' (singular), so 'it' should be used. The phrase 'have to capture' is incorrect; 'can capture' is appropriate.

× Yes I did when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a kid.

A comma after 'Yes' improves clarity and is standard punctuation.

× I always went to the umm drawing class that can develop smile that can help to develop my creativity and also concentrations.

✓ I always went to drawing classes that helped to develop my creativity and concentration.

The phrase 'that can develop smile' is unclear and incorrect. 'Drawing classes' should be plural if referring to multiple sessions. 'Helped' is past tense to match 'went'. 'Concentrations' should be singular 'concentration'.