Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. For example, mention what you enjoy about drawing these landmarks and how it makes you feel.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy drawing famous landmarks such as the Sydney Opera House and the Empire State Building. I find it relaxing to study photos and recreate them, which helps me improve my skills and appreciate their architecture.

Gợi ý: Avoid using filler words and try to use more precise vocabulary. Also, make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent. You could explain why visiting galleries is meaningful and relaxing to add depth.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy visiting art galleries because I find it both meaningful and relaxing. Viewing different paintings allows me to appreciate various styles and provides a peaceful break from daily life.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about why you want to learn about Japanese art history.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am eager to learn more about art, particularly Japanese art history. Since most of the art I have been exposed to is Western, I would love to explore Japanese styles to broaden my understanding.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and filler words. Provide a clear and direct answer with supporting details. For example, explain what kind of drawing experience you had at school and clarify your learning.

Ví dụ: I learned some drawing in school art classes, but I never took any formal courses focused solely on drawing skills.

× I really like to find some photos of a famous tourist attractions like uh, Sydney Opera or umm, the Empire State Building

✓ I really like to find some photos of famous tourist attractions like uh, the Sydney Opera House or umm, the Empire State Building

The phrase 'a famous tourist attractions' is incorrect because 'attractions' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'Sydney Opera' should be 'the Sydney Opera House' for accuracy. The correction removes the singular article and uses the plural form correctly.

× I will just look at the pictures and draw them down uh, most of my drawing.

✓ I will just look at the pictures and draw them, uh, most of my drawings.

The phrase 'most of my drawing' is incorrect because 'drawing' is singular and does not fit with 'most of', which implies plural. Changing 'drawing' to 'drawings' correctly matches the plural sense intended.

× Yes, I really enjoy going to the galleries and see all the paintings

✓ Yes, I really enjoy going to the galleries and seeing all the paintings

After 'enjoy', the verb should be in the '-ing' form. 'See' should be changed to 'seeing' to maintain correct verb form after 'enjoy'.

× because I think it is a very umm, meaningful and uh, kind of relaxing leisure activities.

✓ because I think they are very umm, meaningful and uh, kind of relaxing leisure activities.

The phrase 'a very meaningful and kind of relaxing leisure activities' is incorrect because 'activities' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, the verb should agree with the plural subject 'activities', so 'is' changes to 'are'.

× So umm, I would very love to learn more about Japanese.

✓ So umm, I would really love to learn more about Japanese art.

The phrase 'I would very love' is incorrect; 'very' is not used with 'love' in this way. 'Really' is the correct adverb here. Also, 'Japanese' alone is incomplete; specifying 'Japanese art' clarifies the meaning.

× Well, I learned drawings in the art class of schools, but I didn't really take a official course specifically teaching drawing skills.

✓ Well, I learned drawing in the art classes at school, but I didn't really take an official course specifically teaching drawing skills.

'Learned drawings' is incorrect; 'drawing' as a subject is uncountable here. 'Art class of schools' is awkward; 'art classes at school' is more natural. Also, 'a official' should be 'an official' because 'official' starts with a vowel sound.