Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があり、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、過去形の動詞の使い方や、繰り返しの表現を避けることに注意しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like drawing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. When I was a child, I attended an oil painting class, and I still remember the unique smell of the paint.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に適切に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「impressed about」ではなく「impressed by」を使うべきです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy visiting galleries. A few months ago, I went to the Art Museum in Tokyo to see a special exhibition of Monet's paintings, and I was impressed by his brushwork and use of colors.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で、繰り返しや言いよどみが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。また、口語表現の多用を控え、文を整理することが大切です。

Ví dụ: That's a difficult question. I don't want to study art in detail because I prefer to enjoy it by simply looking and feeling, rather than analyzing it.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます。過去形の正しい使い方や、不要な言葉の削除に注意し、簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, as I mentioned, I attended an oil painting class when I was in elementary school, where I painted pictures of fruits and animals.

× Drawing makes me feel better and drawing can express my feelings.

✓ Drawing makes me feel better and can express my feelings.

The repetition of 'drawing' is unnecessary and awkward. The second clause should omit the subject to avoid redundancy, as the subject is the same as the first clause.

× So and when I was a child I attend oil painting class SO and I remind it reminds me of the old painting smell smells.

✓ When I was a child, I attended an oil painting class, and it reminds me of the old painting smell.

The verb 'attend' should be in past tense 'attended' to match the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Also, 'remind' should be 'reminds' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I went to the Art Museum in Tokyo maybe few months ago.

✓ I went to the Art Museum in Tokyo maybe a few months ago.

The phrase 'few months ago' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct when referring to a small number of months in the past.

× I was impressed about the paint brushwork and painting colors.

✓ I was impressed by the paint brushwork and painting colors.

The correct preposition to use with 'impressed' is 'by', not 'about'. 'Impressed by' indicates the cause of the impression.

× I guess I don't wanna I don't wanna learn about art because I just see the art makes me feel better.

✓ I guess I don't want to learn about art because I just see that art makes me feel better.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with 'want to' in formal speech. Also, 'see the art' is corrected to 'see that art' for clarity and correctness.

× So I don't wanna learn just just feel and see and what think.

✓ So I don't want to learn; I just want to feel, see, and think.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a clearer structure with proper conjunctions and verbs.

× Yes, as I said, I went to the I attend to the old painting class when I was elementary school students and I was doing some of the pictures about fruits or like animals.

✓ Yes, as I said, I attended the oil painting class when I was an elementary school student, and I painted some pictures of fruits and animals.

The verb 'attend' should be in past tense 'attended' to match the past time reference. 'Elementary school students' should be singular 'student' to match the subject 'I'. 'Doing some of the pictures' is corrected to 'painted some pictures' for proper verb usage and clarity.