Art— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复和停顿。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然流畅的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like drawing, but I am not very good at it yet. I think it requires a lot of time, patience, and creativity. Therefore, I have joined a weekly class to improve my skills and ideas.

Gợi ý: 回答内容前后矛盾，表达不清晰，且有重复和语法错误。建议直接回答问题，表达清楚自己的观点，并使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: I don't often go to galleries because I prefer drawing myself. However, when I do visit, I enjoy understanding the ideas behind the artworks.

Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连贯的连接词和更具体的细节。建议使用连接词丰富句子，并具体说明想学习哪些方面的艺术知识。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn more about art because drawing makes me happy. Moreover, I hope to improve my artistic skills and develop my creativity through learning new techniques.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容混乱。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清楚表达童年绘画经历。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked drawing a lot. I used to draw everywhere, like on walls and floors, which made my parents upset.

× I like drawing but I always draw not very good and I think drawing needs a lot of time and patience and some idea, but I didn't have have it.

✓ I like drawing but I always don't draw very well and I think drawing needs a lot of time and patience and some ideas, but I don't have them.

这里的错误是时态和表达方式不正确。"didn't have have it" 应改为现在时 "don't have them"，因为学生表达的是现在的情况。此外，"not very good" 应改为副词形式 "not very well" 来修饰动词 "draw"。另外，"some idea" 应改为复数 "some ideas"，因为这里指的是多个想法。

× So I'm to uh, join once a week to improve my thinking.

✓ So I join once a week to improve my thinking.

这里的错误是多余的介词 "to"。动词 "join" 后面不需要 "to"，直接接时间状语即可。

× Well, I like drawing instead of uh, to see others pictures because, uh, I go to the gallery and I can, I can know the others idea of, of which they draw.

✓ Well, I like drawing instead of seeing others' pictures because I go to the gallery and I can understand others' ideas of what they draw.

"instead of" 后面应接动名词形式 "seeing"，而不是不定式 "to see"。此外，"others pictures" 应为所有格 "others' pictures"，"I can know" 应改为更自然的表达 "I can understand"，"the others idea of, of which they draw" 结构混乱，应改为 "others' ideas of what they draw"。

× So I, I don't go to gallery.

✓ So I don't go to the gallery.

"gallery" 是可数名词，前面需要加定冠词 "the"。

× Well, when I'm kids, I think sometimes I like drawing, but I always, uh, draw everywhere, like on the well, on the floors, on, on the background.

✓ Well, when I was a kid, I think sometimes I liked drawing, but I always drew everywhere, like on the wall, on the floor, on the background.

这里时态错误，描述过去的事情应使用过去时。"I'm kids" 应改为 "I was a kid"，"like" 改为过去时 "liked"，"draw" 改为过去时 "drew"。另外，"well" 应为 "wall"，"floors" 应为单数 "floor"，因为通常指墙壁和地板。

× So my parents always shout to me so and they, I don't like drawing my kids.

✓ So my parents always shouted at me and they said they don't like me drawing on the walls.

"shout to me" 应改为 "shouted at me"，因为 "shout at" 表示对某人大声喊叫。"I don't like drawing my kids" 句子结构混乱，应改为 "they said they don't like me drawing on the walls"，表达父母不喜欢我在墙上画画。