Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?
Thí sinh
Yes, I looking at myself in the mirror every day because I need to check my face and wash my fast and the brush my teeth. I need to use a mirror very often.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought mirrors?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have bought a mirror because mirror is necessary in the daily life so I always need to use a mirror to check out my outlook and some daily routine.
Giám khảo
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I seldom take mirror with me unless I have a meeting. I need to check out my hairstyle so I often not taken a mirror with me.
Giám khảo
Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think mirror is a great decoration. It can let our space more bigger. That is because it is a visibility effect. So I think it is a good decoration.
Do you like looking at yourself in the mirror? How often?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法错误(如时态和动词形式),表达较重复且不够连贯。回答应首先直接回应问题,然后用1-2句具体细节支撑,并使用连接词使结构更自然。注意将冗余内容合并,例如把洗脸、刷牙的动作简洁表述。
Ví dụ: Yes, I look at myself in the mirror every day. I usually check my face and hair while washing and brushing my teeth, so a mirror is part of my morning routine.
Have you ever bought mirrors?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 表达基本能传达意思,但存在语法和词汇使用问题(冠词、词序、重复)。回答应更简洁并给出具体情况,例如什么时候买、买什么种类或用途。使用连接词使句子更顺畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought a mirror before. I bought a full-length mirror last year because I often need to check my outfit and overall appearance before going out.
Do you usually take a mirror with you?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 语法和时态错误较多,表达不够自然且有重复。建议先直接回答(Yes/No),然后说明例外情况并给出具体频率或场景。避免重复同一意思两次。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry a mirror with me. Only when I have an important meeting or event do I bring a small compact mirror to check my hairstyle.
Would you use mirrors to decorate your room?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 能表达观点但有语法和用词不当(比较级和短语错误),且部分解释模糊。建议给出更具体的理由和例子(如反射光线、扩大视觉空间),并用连接词组织原因与结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room because they reflect light and make the space feel larger. For example, I would place a large mirror opposite a window to brighten the room and create a sense of depth.
× Yes, I looking at myself in the mirror every day because I need to check my face and wash my fast and the brush my teeth.
✓ Yes, I look at myself in the mirror every day because I need to check my face, wash my face and brush my teeth.
句中“I looking”动词形式错误,应使用一般现在时的主语+动词原形“look”。另外“wash my fast”应为“wash my face”,“and the brush my teeth”多了定冠词且动词形式错误,应并列使用动词原形。建议:一般现在时第三人称除外,第一人称用动词原形;并列动词保持相同形式。
× I need to use a mirror very often.
✓ I need to use a mirror very often.
句子本身语法正确,但可以根据语境改为复数或泛指:若想表达经常使用镜子(不特指一面),可改为“I need to use mirrors very often.”。原句不违反列表中的限定性冠词错误。
× Yes, I have bought a mirror because mirror is necessary in the daily life so I always need to use a mirror to check out my outlook and some daily routine.
✓ Yes, I have bought a mirror because a mirror is necessary in daily life, so I always need to use a mirror to check my appearance and do some daily routines.
在英语中,名词单数可数时需加冠词,此处“mirror”作为泛指应为“a mirror”。“in the daily life”习惯说法为“in daily life”或“in everyday life”。“check out my outlook”不自然,应为“check my appearance”。“some daily routine”应为复数“daily routines”或“my daily routine”。建议:遇到单个可数名词且泛指时使用不定冠词a/an;注意习惯搭配。
× To be honest, I seldom take mirror with me unless I have a meeting.
✓ To be honest, I seldom take a mirror with me unless I have a meeting.
“take mirror with me”中可数名词“mirror”缺少冠词,同时句中代词使用本身无误但名词需冠词。建议:可数单数名词前加a/an。
× I need to check out my hairstyle so I often not taken a mirror with me.
✓ I need to check my hairstyle, so I often do not take a mirror with me.
原句“I often not taken a mirror”使用了过去分词“taken”并且缺少助动词,结构错误。表达现在习惯应使用一般现在时否定结构“do not take”。另外“check out my hairstyle”可以简化为“check my hairstyle”。建议:现在时否定用 do/does + not + 动词原形;不要随意使用过去分词。
× Yes, I think mirror is a great decoration.
✓ Yes, I think a mirror is a great decoration.
可数名词单数“mirror”前需不定冠词“a”来表示泛指。建议:单数可数名词前加a/an。
× It can let our space more bigger.
✓ It can make our space bigger.
“more bigger”是冗余比较错误,形容词“bigger”已包含比较意义,不应再加“more”。此外动词“let”用法不自然,改为“make”更合适。建议:避免重复比较词;选择合适动词搭配。
× That is because it is a visibility effect.
✓ That is because it creates a visual effect.
原句“it is a visibility effect”结构与表达不自然。应使用动词“create”并用名词短语“visual effect”来表达“视觉效果”。建议:使用地道短语“visual effect”并注意动词搭配。