Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like teamwork?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy teamwork very much because it's allowed people to combine their idea. Actions afford to self a common problem. For example, when we have a school project, student usually divide into groups and help each other to complete the work. This make us more easier and faster to achieve and get a better result.
Giám khảo
Have you teamed up with someone else before?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have team up with someone else quite often, especially when I was in high school. I would say at that time there were a lot of school project that the teacher asked to do. So it can be more challenging for us to do that.
Giám khảo
What do you learn from working in a team?
Thí sinh
Well, there are so many things that I have learned from working in a team. I would say working in a team could bring as many ideas to complete the project and it's also challenging us to be afford all the time. So that's gonna make us feel more strange and boost our ability.
Giám khảo
What do you dislike about teamwork?
Thí sinh
Well, there are a few things I dislike about him work. For example sometime A-Team member don't communicate well or they just ignore each other idea. So this is the reason that can cause delay in completing the project. Also this lack of cooperation make it difficult to finish the work on time and it's affected overall quality.
Do you like teamwork?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: In your answer, try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, say "it allows people to combine their ideas" instead of "it's allowed people to combine their idea." Also, avoid unclear phrases like "Actions afford to self a common problem." Use linking words like "for example" properly and check subject-verb agreement, such as "students usually divide into groups."
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy teamwork very much because it allows people to combine their ideas. For example, when we have a school project, students usually divide into groups and help each other to complete the work. This makes it easier and faster for us to achieve better results.
Have you teamed up with someone else before?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Focus on using correct verb tenses and plural forms. For example, say "I have teamed up" instead of "I have team up," and "a lot of school projects" instead of "a lot of school project." Also, try to make your sentences more complete and clear by adding linking words and explanations.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have teamed up with others quite often, especially when I was in high school. At that time, there were many school projects that teachers asked us to do, so working together made it easier to handle these challenges.
What do you learn from working in a team?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Try to use clearer and more accurate vocabulary. For example, "bring as many ideas" should be "bring many ideas," and "challenging us to be afford" is unclear; you might say "challenge us to be responsible." Avoid informal phrases like "gonna" and unclear words like "strange." Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Ví dụ: Well, I have learned many things from working in a team. For example, teamwork brings many ideas to complete the project, and it also challenges us to be responsible. This experience helps us feel more confident and improves our abilities.
What do you dislike about teamwork?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Improve your grammar and clarity. For example, say "I dislike about teamwork" instead of "him work," and "team members" instead of "A-Team member." Use plural forms correctly, like "ideas" instead of "idea." Also, use linking words like "for example" and "also" properly to make your answer coherent.
Ví dụ: Well, there are a few things I dislike about teamwork. For example, sometimes team members don't communicate well or ignore each other's ideas. This can cause delays in completing the project. Also, this lack of cooperation makes it difficult to finish the work on time and affects the overall quality.
× Yes, I enjoy teamwork very much because it's allowed people to combine their idea.
✓ Yes, I enjoy teamwork very much because it allows people to combine their ideas.
The modal verb 'allowed' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is 'allows' to indicate present tense third person singular. Also, 'idea' should be plural 'ideas' to match the context.
× Actions afford to self a common problem.
✓ Actions help us solve a common problem.
The phrase 'afford to self' is incorrect. The correct pronoun is 'us' and the verb 'help' fits better to express assistance in solving a problem.
× For example, when we have a school project, student usually divide into groups and help each other to complete the work.
✓ For example, when we have a school project, students usually divide into groups and help each other to complete the work.
The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'divide' and the context of multiple people.
× This make us more easier and faster to achieve and get a better result.
✓ This makes it easier and faster for us to achieve and get a better result.
The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is sufficient. Added 'it' and 'for us' for clarity.
× Yes, I have team up with someone else quite often, especially when I was in high school.
✓ Yes, I have teamed up with someone else quite often, especially when I was in high school.
The past participle form 'teamed' is required after 'have' to form the present perfect tense.
× I would say at that time there were a lot of school project that the teacher asked to do.
✓ I would say at that time there were a lot of school projects that the teacher asked us to do.
The noun 'project' should be plural 'projects' to match 'a lot of'. Added 'us' for clarity.
× So it can be more challenging for us to do that.
✓ So it was more challenging for us to do that.
Since the context is past ('when I was in high school'), 'can' should be changed to past tense 'was'.
× Well, there are so many things that I have learned from working in a team.
✓ Well, there are so many things that I have learned from working in a team.
No grammatical error detected in this sentence.
× I would say working in a team could bring as many ideas to complete the project and it's also challenging us to be afford all the time.
✓ I would say working in a team can bring many ideas to complete the project and it also challenges us to be responsible all the time.
'Could' is less certain; 'can' fits better here. 'As many ideas' is incorrect; 'many ideas' is correct. 'It's also challenging us to be afford' is incorrect; 'it also challenges us to be responsible' is correct.
× So that's gonna make us feel more strange and boost our ability.
✓ So that's going to make us feel more confident and boost our ability.
'More strange' is incorrect in this context; 'more confident' or a positive adjective fits better.
× Well, there are a few things I dislike about him work.
✓ Well, there are a few things I dislike about teamwork.
'Him work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'teamwork'.
× For example sometime A-Team member don't communicate well or they just ignore each other idea.
✓ For example, sometimes team members don't communicate well or they just ignore each other's ideas.
'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'A-Team member' should be plural 'team members'. 'Each other idea' should be 'each other's ideas'.
× So this is the reason that can cause delay in completing the project.
✓ So this is the reason that can cause delays in completing the project.
'Delay' should be plural 'delays' to match the context.
× Also this lack of cooperation make it difficult to finish the work on time and it's affected overall quality.
✓ Also, this lack of cooperation makes it difficult to finish the work on time and it affects overall quality.
The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'lack'. 'It's affected' should be 'it affects' to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement.