Teamwork— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "allow" nên là "allows" vì chủ ngữ số ít, "another people" nên là "other people". Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ chính xác hơn như "valuable" thay vì "valueable". Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy teamwork because it allows me to share my ideas with other people and gain different perspectives. This helps me broaden my horizons and receive valuable feedback.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác như "a cutting the nated" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, dùng từ phù hợp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have worked with others many times, especially at university. For example, I often collaborated with classmates to prepare presentations and exchange ideas.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng nhiều lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp như "valueable" nên là "valuable", "skews" có thể là "skills", "scam" không đúng nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói "calm" hoặc "calm down". Hãy chú ý phát âm và chính tả, dùng từ chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: Working in a team has taught me valuable skills. For example, I have learned to be more patient and listen to others' ideas. It also helped me build confidence to share and persuade others with my own ideas.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "DIADA" và "addendum" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên dùng từ đơn giản và chính xác hơn như "some people don't put enough effort". Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không đúng hoặc không phù hợp.

Ví dụ: What I dislike about teamwork is when some people don't put enough effort and rely too much on the leaders or others. This makes the teamwork less effective.

× I really enjoyed teamwork because it allow me to share my ideas with another people and I can also receive another different perspective from the project.

✓ I really enjoy teamwork because it allows me to share my ideas with other people and I can also receive different perspectives from the project.

The verb 'allow' should be in third person singular form 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'another people' is incorrect; 'other people' is the correct plural form. 'Another different perspective' is redundant; 'different perspectives' is clearer and plural to match 'people'.

× I really enjoyed teamwork because it allow me to share my ideas with another people and I can also receive another different perspective from the project.

✓ I really enjoy teamwork because it allows me to share my ideas with other people and I can also receive different perspectives from the project.

The preposition 'with' is correctly used with 'share my ideas with other people'. However, 'from the project' is acceptable but 'on the project' might be more natural when referring to perspectives related to a project.

× I would say I have collaborated with the people for many times, especially during the university.

✓ I would say I have collaborated with people many times, especially during university.

The phrase 'for many times' is incorrect; 'many times' is the correct expression. Also, 'the people' is unnecessary; 'people' is sufficient. 'During the university' should be 'during university' or 'during my time at university'.

× You know for example, I often a cutting the nated with them to make the presentation for our lesson to exchange our ideas.

✓ For example, I often collaborate with them to prepare presentations for our lessons to exchange ideas.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'a cutting the nated'. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper verb usage and sentence structure.

× Well I would say it taught me a lot of valueable lessons for my skews.

✓ Well, I would say it taught me a lot of valuable lessons for my skills.

'Valueable' is a misspelling of 'valuable'. 'Skews' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'skills'. 'A lot of' is correctly used here.

× For example I would need to be more scam and be more patient to you all listen to the others ideas and it also built my confidence to share my own ideas to other people and persuade them to believe in my.

✓ For example, I need to be more calm and more patient to listen to others' ideas, and it also builds my confidence to share my own ideas with other people and persuade them to believe in me.

'Scam' is incorrect; the correct word is 'calm'. 'To you all listen' is incorrect; it should be 'to listen'. 'The others ideas' should be 'others' ideas' to show possession. 'Built' should be 'builds' to maintain present tense. 'To other people' should be 'with other people'. 'Believe in my' should be 'believe in me'.

× Well, I would say it is some DIADA people they don't make their effort to teamwork because they only rely on the leaders or the other people who try much more addendum.

✓ Well, I would say there are some lazy people who don't make an effort in teamwork because they only rely on the leaders or other people who try much harder.

'DIADA' is unclear; likely intended 'lazy'. 'They don't make their effort to teamwork' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'don't make an effort in teamwork'. 'The other people' should be 'other people'. 'Try much more addendum' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'try much harder'.

× Well, I would say it is some DIADA people they don't make their effort to teamwork because they only rely on the leaders or the other people who try much more addendum.

✓ Well, I would say there are some lazy people who don't make an effort in teamwork because they only rely on the leaders or other people who try much harder.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it is some DIADA people'; the correct structure is 'there are some lazy people' to indicate existence.

× So you know it's not an effective teamwork.

✓ So, you know, it's not effective teamwork.

'An effective teamwork' is incorrect because 'teamwork' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'an'. The correct phrase is 'effective teamwork'.