Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and avoiding vague phrases like "over the moon" which is not appropriate here. Also, try to add linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a favourite teacher who was my English teacher. I like him because he is very calm and explains lessons clearly. As a result, all his students enjoy his classes and learn well.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Please use correct prepositions and sentence structures. Also, try to explain your ideas more clearly and logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. Since my primary and secondary schools are the same, our connection has become stronger, and I really appreciate this relationship.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to organize your points and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more specific about how the teacher helped you.

Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways. For example, he gave me useful notes and explained lessons in an easy way. Moreover, he advised me on how to improve myself and motivated me when I felt depressed.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows good ideas but needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrases like "give the country best student best talent."

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because teachers are the backbone of any nation. For example, they help students develop their talents and skills. Therefore, I would love to become a teacher and contribute to society.

× he is very calm and his teaching style is over the moon

✓ he is very calm and his teaching style is excellent

The phrase 'over the moon' is an idiom meaning extremely happy, which is not appropriate to describe a teaching style. Instead, use an adjective like 'excellent' to describe the teaching style clearly.

× I still in touch to my primary school teacher

✓ I am still in touch with my primary school teacher

The correct preposition to use with 'in touch' is 'with', not 'to'. Also, the verb 'am' is missing before 'still' to form the present continuous tense.

× and my primary school and my secondary school as the same

✓ and my primary school and my secondary school are the same

The sentence lacks a verb; 'are' should be used to link the subject and complement properly.

× the connection between me and my teacher are solidifies

✓ the connection between me and my teacher solidifies

The subject 'connection' is singular, so the verb should be 'solidifies' without 'are'. Using 'are' causes subject-verb disagreement.

× My favorite teacher helps me in several way

✓ My favorite teacher helps me in several ways

The phrase 'several way' is incorrect because 'several' requires a plural noun; it should be 'several ways'.

× sometimes he suggests to me how to do things

✓ sometimes he suggests to me how to do things

The verb 'suggest' is not usually followed by 'to' before the indirect object. It should be 'he suggests how to do things to me' or 'he suggests to me how to do things'. However, the original sentence is acceptable in informal speech, so no correction is strictly necessary here.

× teach me in a easy way

✓ teach me in an easy way

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'easy'.

× sometimes motivate me when I feel depressed

✓ sometimes motivates me when I feel depressed

The subject 'he' is missing before 'motivates', and the verb should be in third person singular form 'motivates' to agree with 'he'.

× because teacher is the backbone of any nation

✓ because a teacher is the backbone of any nation

The singular countable noun 'teacher' requires an article 'a' before it.

× a teacher can give the country best student best talent

✓ a teacher can give the country’s best students the best talent

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'best', and possessive form 'country’s' is needed to show ownership. Also, 'the best talent' requires the definite article 'the'.