Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do have a favorite teacher. I met this teacher in a dance class and I regularly go to that dance class till now. I like her because she is really energetic and every time I go to her class I feel that I am recharged.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher and also actually also my secondary school teacher. I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
First of all, she's really energetic. Every time I go to her class, I feel full of energy and passion, which boost my motivation to learn how to dance. Also, she always encouraged me when I don't dance well.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
I never thought of being a teacher in the future because I'm not a I'm not an energetic person. I don't think I can influence my students in a good way. I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of in front of a lot of students.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构较简单,缺少连接词使得表达略显单调。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构,并增加具体细节以增强表达效果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a favourite teacher whom I met in a dance class. I still attend her classes regularly because she is very energetic, and whenever I join her lessons, I feel recharged and motivated to improve my dancing skills.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单且有重复词汇,表达不够流畅。建议避免重复,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并补充具体原因或感受。
Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary or secondary school teachers because I have not visited my old schools since I graduated, so we lost contact over time.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有逻辑,但部分语法和词汇使用不够准确。建议注意时态和单复数形式,使用更多连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Firstly, she is very energetic, and every time I attend her class, I feel full of energy and passion, which boosts my motivation to learn dancing. Moreover, she always encourages me when I don't perform well, helping me improve.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了个人观点,但存在重复和语法错误,且句子较长不够简洁。建议避免重复,简化句子结构,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I have never considered becoming a teacher because I am not very energetic. Also, I am introverted and lack the confidence to speak in front of many students, so I don't think I could positively influence them.
× I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.
✓ I never went back to my mother's school after I graduated.
这里的时间是过去发生的动作,应该使用过去时态。'graduate' 应改为过去式 'graduated'。
× which boost my motivation to learn how to dance.
✓ which boosts my motivation to learn how to dance.
关系代词 'which' 指代单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'boosts'。
× I never went back to my mother's school after I graduate.
✓ I never went back to my mother's school after I graduated.
这里的错误主要是时态问题,已在上面指出。
× I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of in front of a lot of students.
✓ I'm really introverted and I think I'm not brave enough to speak in front of a lot of students.
句子中重复了 'in front of a lot of',应删除重复部分,保持表达简洁。