Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且有语法错误，如“friendly tone”应为“a friendly tone”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is my Chinese teacher because she always teaches in a very friendly and patient manner, which makes learning enjoyable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“not touch”应为“not in touch”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子并避免重复。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher because I moved to another city after graduation, so we lost contact.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但有语法错误，如“concern me”应为“was concerned about me”。建议注意时态和动词搭配，使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: I remember one rainy day when I forgot my umbrella, my teacher kindly gave me hers and was concerned about whether I got wet.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如“need needs many patience”应为“requires a lot of patience”，且“which I was. I am weak off.”表达不清。建议使用更准确的句子表达自己的观点。

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a teacher because my parents are teachers, and I know the job requires a lot of patience, which I lack.

× She always teaches Chinese in very friendly tone.

✓ She always teaches Chinese in a very friendly tone.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“tone”是可数名词，表示“一种语气”，需要用不定冠词修饰。

× No, I'm not touch with my primary school teacher umm, because after I graduated from primary school I moved to other city so I can't, I can't communicate.

✓ No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher, umm, because after I graduated from primary school I moved to another city so I can't communicate.

短语应为“in touch with”，表示“保持联系”；“other city”应改为“another city”，表示“另一个城市”。

× I still remember that in a rainy day I forgot to take my umbrella.

✓ I still remember that on a rainy day I forgot to take my umbrella.

时间状语“in a rainy day”应改为“on a rainy day”，因为表示具体某一天时用介词“on”。

× My teacher kindly gave her umbrella to me and concern me whether I was wet.

✓ My teacher kindly gave her umbrella to me and was concerned about whether I was wet.

动词“concern”用法错误，应使用被动或过去式“was concerned about”，并且后面接介词“about”。

× I know the work need needs many patience, which I was.

✓ I know the work needs a lot of patience, which I don't have.

“need”应为第三人称单数“needs”；“many patience”错误，patience是不可数名词，应使用“a lot of patience”；“which I was”语义不通，改为“which I don't have”更合适。

× I am weak off.

✓ I am weak at it.

短语应为“weak at”，表示“在某方面弱”，而不是“weak off”。