Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course that I have a favorite teacher for me. Umm, my English teacher is really good because she is so kind and she know many knowledge that I don't know and I can answer for her for some question and she can explain for me everything that I need to do, I need to know.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
I'm actually I'm at the primary school, so of course that I have to contact with them and I need to ask them some question about doing homework or what they are talking at the test or something else.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
Hmm I think she will explain for me what is this and what should I do so I can do it by myself and improve my knowledge a lot. Additionally she is really kind so I can ask her for everything without sighing or anxiety.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Of course that I do because teacher is have a lot of student and we can connect with each other like the parent who come from the student and we can play with children a lot because I like children a lot.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "know many knowledge" và câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tập trung vào ý chính. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp từ.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a favourite teacher. My English teacher is very kind and knowledgeable. She always explains things clearly, which helps me understand difficult topics better.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teachers because I often ask them questions about homework and tests.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ khi nói về sự giúp đỡ trong quá khứ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "without sighing or anxiety". Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me by explaining difficult concepts clearly, so I could understand and complete tasks independently. She was very kind, which made me feel comfortable asking questions.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "teacher is have" và dùng từ phù hợp hơn. Hãy trình bày lý do một cách mạch lạc và có liên kết giữa các ý.
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy working with children and helping them learn and grow.
× she know many knowledge that I don't know
✓ she knows much knowledge that I don't know
The verb 'know' must agree with the third person singular subject 'she', so it should be 'knows'. Also, 'many knowledge' is incorrect; 'knowledge' is uncountable, so 'much knowledge' is appropriate.
× I can answer for her for some question
✓ I can answer some questions for her
The verb 'answer' does not require the preposition 'for' before the object. Also, 'question' should be plural as it refers to multiple questions.
× she can explain for me everything that I need to do
✓ she can explain to me everything that I need to do
The verb 'explain' is followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person receiving the explanation.
× I'm actually I'm at the primary school
✓ I'm actually at primary school
The phrase 'at the primary school' is acceptable but 'at primary school' is more natural when referring to attending school. Also, the repetition 'I'm actually I'm' is redundant and should be corrected.
× I have to contact with them
✓ I have to contact them
The verb 'contact' does not require the preposition 'with' after it.
× I need to ask them some question
✓ I need to ask them some questions
The noun 'question' should be plural 'questions' when preceded by 'some'.
× what they are talking at the test
✓ what they are talking about in the test
The verb 'talk' is followed by the preposition 'about' when indicating the topic. Also, 'in the test' is more appropriate than 'at the test'.
× she will explain for me what is this and what should I do
✓ she explains to me what this is and what I should do
The modal 'will' is unnecessary here; present simple is better for habitual actions. Also, word order in indirect questions should be 'what this is' and 'what I should do'.
× she will explain for me
✓ she explains to me
The verb 'explain' requires the preposition 'to' before the person receiving the explanation.
× I can ask her for everything without sighing or anxiety
✓ I can ask her for everything without sighing or anxiety
No grammatical error detected in this sentence regarding prepositions.
× teacher is have a lot of student
✓ a teacher has a lot of students
The singular noun 'teacher' requires the verb 'has' for third person singular. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' when preceded by 'a lot of'.
× teacher is have a lot of student
✓ a teacher has a lot of students
The verb phrase 'is have' is incorrect; it should be 'has' for third person singular.
× we can connect with each other like the parent who come from the student
✓ we can connect with each other like the parents who come from the students
The plural forms 'parents' and 'students' are needed to agree with 'each other'. Also, 'come' should be 'come' for plural subject 'parents'.
× like the parent who come from the student
✓ like the parents who come from the students
The preposition 'from' is correct, but the nouns should be plural to match the context.