Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构不完整，且逻辑连接词使用不当。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的连接词，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher was my junior high school math teacher because she supported me a lot during lessons. Although she was strict, I knew she cared about my progress.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够连贯。建议避免重复，使用恰当的时态和连接词，使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because I don't have their contact information. Besides, I now live in Shanghai while they live in Wuxi.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的句子和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并具体说明帮助的方式。

Ví dụ: My math teacher helped me by teaching problem-solving methods and encouraging me to understand the reasoning behind them, which improved my critical thinking skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并提供更具体的理由。

Ví dụ: I don't want to be a teacher because, although it is a respected and stable job, the salary for teachers in China is relatively low.

× Moreover, although she strictly monitored as she cared me a lot.

✓ Moreover, although she strictly monitored me as she cared a lot.

句中缺少宾语，动词monitor需要宾语，且care后应接介词for或直接用care作动词时后面接宾语。此处应改为"monitored me"，并调整"cared me"为"cared a lot"或"cared for me"。

× No, because I don't have the method to get in touch with them.

✓ No, because I don't have a way to get in touch with them.

method通常指方法，搭配不当，表达联系方式时应使用"a way"或"means"。

× For example, I don't have the phone number or the WeChat number of them.

✓ For example, I don't have their phone number or WeChat number.

"of them"用法不自然，英语中通常用物主代词"their"来表示所属关系。

× Moreover, now I lived in live in Shanghai, however they are living in Wuxi.

✓ Moreover, now I live in Shanghai, however they live in Wuxi.

句中时态混乱，"now"表示现在，应使用一般现在时，"lived"为过去式，应改为"live"。

× My math teacher in junior high school helped me not only with giving me the method of to solve the problem, but also let me think about the method behind that.

✓ My math teacher in junior high school helped me not only by giving me the method to solve the problem, but also by letting me think about the method behind it.

"helped me with giving"搭配不当，应使用"helped me by giving"。"method of to solve"结构错误，应为"method to solve"。此外，"let me think"前应加介词"by"以保持平行结构。

× How to think?

✓ How should I think?

该句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整，应补充完整使其成为疑问句。

× Although being a teacher represents the respect from others or a stable work.

✓ Although being a teacher represents respect from others and a stable job.

"or"连接的两项应为并列关系，此处应使用"and"。另外，"work"应改为"job"更合适。

× However, I think the salary of the teacher in China is not so high, so I don't want to be a teacher in the future.

✓ However, I think the salary of teachers in China is not very high, so I don't want to be a teacher in the future.

"the teacher"应改为复数形式"teachers"，表示一般意义上的教师。"not so high"表达不够地道，改为"not very high"更自然。