Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I do have a favorite teacher is my English teacher. She is not only my teacher, but also my friend. I remember when I met some difficulties in the English learning, she told some useful methods and encouraged me to face the difficulties bravely and never give up. With her guidance, I got up.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, we have known each other for about 20 years when I was studying in junior high school. Still in touch with each other because sometimes I asked her some English questions and shared some interesting experience with each other. In this process, I feel very happy and relaxed.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
I remember that when I faced difficulties in learning English, she gave me useful study methods and encouraged me to face challenges bravely without giving up. Thanks to her guidance and encouragement, my English skills have improved a lot. So As for me, she is not only my teacher but also my support.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I want to be a teacher in the future just like my favorite teacher, she always motivate me to be a better person and full of association and love I I'm very pleased to provide knowledge with my students and.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,例如“do have a favorite teacher is my English teacher”结构不正确,且句子较长且略显重复。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,并注意时态和语法的准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favorite teacher is my English teacher. She is not only my teacher but also my friend. When I faced difficulties in learning English, she gave me useful advice and encouraged me to keep trying. Thanks to her support, I improved a lot.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整,如“Still in touch with each other because...”缺少主语和谓语,表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. We have known each other for about 20 years since I was in junior high school. Sometimes, I ask her English questions and share interesting experiences with her. This communication makes me feel happy and relaxed.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但最后一句“so As for me”表达不自然且有语法错误。建议注意句子开头的大小写和连贯性,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: When I had difficulties learning English, my favorite teacher gave me effective study methods and encouraged me to be brave and persistent. Thanks to her support, my English has improved significantly. She is not only my teacher but also my source of motivation.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,如“she always motivate me”应为“motivates”,句子后半部分不完整且含糊。建议简化表达,确保句子完整且语法正确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future, just like my favorite teacher. She always motivates me to become a better person. I would be happy to share knowledge and help my students grow.
× Yes, of course I do have a favorite teacher is my English teacher.
✓ Yes, of course I do have a favorite teacher. She is my English teacher.
原句中缺少连接词或标点,导致句子结构混乱。应将句子拆分为两个完整句子,避免单复数问题。
× I remember when I met some difficulties in the English learning, she told some useful methods and encouraged me to face the difficulties bravely and never give up.
✓ I remember when I met some difficulties in learning English, she told me some useful methods and encouraged me to face the difficulties bravely and never give up.
“in the English learning”中的“the”使用不当,英语学习一般用“learning English”表达,且“told some useful methods”应加宾语“me”。
× With her guidance, I got up.
✓ With her guidance, I got through them.
“got up”意为起床,与上下文不符,应使用“got through them”表示克服困难。
× Yes, of course, we have known each other for about 20 years when I was studying in junior high school.
✓ Yes, of course, we have known each other for about 20 years since I was studying in junior high school.
“for about 20 years when I was studying”时态和时间状语搭配不当,应使用“since”引导起始时间点。
× Still in touch with each other because sometimes I asked her some English questions and shared some interesting experience with each other.
✓ We are still in touch with each other because sometimes I ask her some English questions and share some interesting experiences with her.
句子缺少主语,时态不一致,且“experience”应为复数形式。
× In this process, I feel very happy and relaxed.
✓ During this process, I feel very happy and relaxed.
“In this process”用法不当,通常用“During this process”表示在此过程中。
× So As for me, she is not only my teacher but also my support.
✓ So, as for me, she is not only my teacher but also my support.
“So As for me”中“so”和“as for me”连接不当,应加逗号分隔。
× she always motivate me to be a better person and full of association and love I I'm very pleased to provide knowledge with my students and.
✓ She always motivates me to be a better person, full of compassion and love. I am very pleased to provide knowledge to my students.
动词“motivate”应加-s变为第三人称单数形式“motivates”;“association”用词错误,应为“compassion”;句子结构混乱,需拆分并调整。