Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で自然ですが、より具体的な詳細や理由を加えることで、内容を豊かにし、より効果的な答えにできます。例えば、なぜ彼女が好きなのか、どのように教え方が良いのかを説明すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is Victoria, who teaches Spanish at my school. I like her because she is very patient and explains difficult grammar points clearly, which helps me understand better.

Gợi ý: 文法的な誤り（"contact with"ではなく"contact"や"keep in touch"）を修正し、理由をもう少し詳しく述べると良いです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然な流れになります。

Ví dụ: I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because they live far away in Thailand and Japan, so it is difficult to keep contact with them.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り（"when I was a fluent"や"explained me"）を直し、内容を整理して簡潔に述べることが必要です。さらに、接続詞を使って文を論理的に繋げ、具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me a lot when I was learning Spanish. She clearly explained the school rules and showed me how to find my classrooms, which made my first days much easier.

Gợi ý: 理由が明確で良いですが、文の構造を改善し、接続詞を使ってより自然に話すと良いです。また、語彙を少し工夫して表現を豊かにしましょう。

Ví dụ: I don't want to be a teacher in the future because the hourly pay in Japan is quite low. Besides, I am not very interested in teaching others, so I prefer to pursue a different career.

× I do not contact with my primary teachers because either of them is in Thailand or Japan, which is very far from Mexico.

✓ I do not contact my primary teachers because either of them is in Thailand or Japan, which is very far from Mexico.

The verb 'contact' does not require the preposition 'with' after it. The correct form is 'contact someone' without 'with'. Therefore, 'contact with my primary teachers' should be corrected to 'contact my primary teachers'.

× She helped me a lot when I was a fluent in Spanish and she and she explained me clearly about the school and also taught me how to go to the classes which helped me a lot.

✓ She helped me a lot when I was fluent in Spanish and she explained to me clearly about the school and also taught me how to go to the classes which helped me a lot.

The phrase 'I was a fluent in Spanish' is incorrect; 'fluent' is an adjective and should not have an article 'a' before it. It should be 'I was fluent in Spanish'. Also, 'explained me' is incorrect; the verb 'explain' requires the preposition 'to' before the indirect object, so it should be 'explained to me'. Additionally, the repeated phrase 'and she' is redundant and should be removed.

× I do not want to be a teacher since in Japan if I would work there then the money they pay for an hour is very low.

✓ I do not want to be a teacher since in Japan if I work there, then the money they pay per hour is very low.

The use of 'would' in the conditional clause 'if I would work there' is incorrect. In conditional sentences, the simple present tense is used in the 'if' clause to express real conditions. Therefore, 'if I would work there' should be 'if I work there'. Also, 'pay for an hour' is better expressed as 'pay per hour'.