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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you have a favourite teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, I love a lot of teachers but my favorite teacher is my maths teacher in secondary school. She is really responsible and kind hearted and she always give feedback after class on my performance and help me when I need help.

Giám khảo

Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?

Thí sinh

No, because you know, I am a student with a full plate. I live a busy life so I don't have too much time to keep in touch with them.

Giám khảo

In what way did your favourite teacher help you?

Thí sinh

Many ways. One of the ways is in my life. When I need help, my teacher always help me at once and when I meet some difficulties she also help me to solve it.

Giám khảo

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Thí sinh

Unfortunately Nope because I'm a person who are not patient enough and though I am very responsible but I don't like teachers this job.

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Part 1

Do you have a favourite teacher?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如动词时态和单复数形式不正确,且句子较长,缺少适当的连接词,使表达不够流畅。建议注意动词时态一致,使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have many teachers I like, but my favourite is my secondary school maths teacher. She is very responsible and kind-hearted. Moreover, she always gives me feedback after class and helps me whenever I need assistance.

Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为口语化,使用了俚语表达“a student with a full plate”,可能不够正式。建议使用更正式的表达,并且注意主谓一致,如“them”指代单数老师时应改为“him/her”。

Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because I have a busy schedule. Therefore, I don't have much time to keep contact with him or her.

In what way did your favourite teacher help you?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如动词单复数形式错误,句子结构不完整且表达不够具体。建议使用完整句子,注意动词形式,并提供更具体的帮助细节。

Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways. For example, whenever I needed help, she would assist me immediately. She also helped me solve problems when I faced difficulties.

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子,注意主谓一致,避免口语化的“nope”,并清楚表达原因。

Ví dụ: Unfortunately, I do not want to be a teacher in the future because I am not patient enough. Although I am responsible, I do not like this profession.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× She is really responsible and kind hearted and she always give feedback after class on my performance and help me when I need help.

She is really responsible and kind-hearted and she always gives feedback after class on my performance and helps me when I need help.

主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s或-es。这里的"she"对应的动词"give"和"help"应改为"gives"和"helps"。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I live a busy life so I don't have too much time to keep in touch with them.

I live a busy life so I don't have too much time to keep in touch with them.

此句无主谓一致错误,保持原句。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× When I need help, my teacher always help me at once and when I meet some difficulties she also help me to solve it.

When I need help, my teacher always helps me at once and when I meet some difficulties she also helps me to solve them.

主语"my teacher"是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,"help"应改为"helps"。此外,"difficulties"是复数,指代时应使用复数代词"them",而不是"it"。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Unfortunately Nope because I'm a person who are not patient enough and though I am very responsible but I don't like teachers this job.

Unfortunately, nope, because I'm a person who is not patient enough and though I am very responsible, I don't like the teaching job.

关系代词"who"后面的动词应与先行词"person"(第三人称单数)一致,故"are"应改为"is"。此外,句子中缺少逗号,"teachers this job"表达不清,应改为"the teaching job"。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
FullFilled; Crowded with; Occupied; Replete; Comprehensive
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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