Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do have a favorite teacher. She is a very good lady. She's my primary school teacher called Lee. She taught me how to do public speech. I really missed her.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm still in touch with my primary school teacher, Mrs. Lee. We added each other on WeChat and as a friend, I often send her holiday wishes during festivals. She usually replies very quick and we will chat for a little bit and care about our daily life. It's a great way to connect it.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
My favorite teacher, Mrs. Lee, helped me become a much more confident person. Before I met her, I was very shy and couldn't speak in front of others, but she encouraged me to practice public speaking regularly. Because of her support, I gradually come over my fear and now I feel.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'd like to be a teacher in the future. Exactly, I'm working on it right now. That's why I'm learning English so hard. I like to teach my students art, languages and so on. It's a great way to help others and achieve my dream.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达了对老师的喜爱和具体的教学内容,但语言稍显简单,且部分句子不够自然流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式,避免重复,并适当丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a favorite teacher from primary school named Mrs. Lee. She was very kind and taught me how to improve my public speaking skills. I really appreciate her guidance and often think about those lessons.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且符合问题,但部分表达不够地道,如“replies very quick”和“connect it”。建议使用更自然的短语,并注意语法和连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I keep in touch with Mrs. Lee through WeChat. I usually send her holiday greetings during festivals, and she replies quickly. We often chat briefly about our daily lives, which helps us stay connected.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了老师的帮助,但结尾不完整且有语法错误(如“come over my fear”应为“overcome my fear”)。建议注意句子完整性和正确用词,同时丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Mrs. Lee helped me become more confident by encouraging me to practice public speaking regularly. Before that, I was very shy and afraid to speak in front of others, but her support helped me overcome my fear gradually.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了愿望和努力,但部分表达不够自然,如“learning English so hard”和“and so on”。建议使用更地道的表达,避免模糊词汇,并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future, and I'm currently working towards that goal by studying English diligently. I hope to teach subjects like art and languages because I enjoy helping others and fulfilling my dream.
× She usually replies very quick and we will chat for a little bit and care about our daily life.
✓ She usually replies very quickly and we will chat for a little bit and care about our daily life.
这里“quick”是形容词,但用来修饰动词“replies”时应使用副词“quickly”。副词用来修饰动词,形容词用来修饰名词。
× Because of her support, I gradually come over my fear and now I feel.
✓ Because of her support, I gradually came over my fear and now I feel confident.
句子中描述过去的经历,动词应使用过去时“came”。另外,句子末尾不完整,缺少形容词“confident”来表达完整意思。
× It's a great way to connect it.
✓ It's a great way to connect.
“connect”后不需要加“it”,此处“connect”作为不及物动词使用,直接表达“连接”的意思即可。
× Exactly, I'm working on it right now.
✓ I'm exactly working on it right now.
“Exactly”作为副词,放在句首与句意不符,正确位置应靠近动词“working”以强调正在进行的动作。