Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples to support your points. For example, instead of repeating phrases, you can say: "My favorite teacher was my high school English teacher because she made learning enjoyable and easy to understand by using real-life stories. She was very supportive and caring towards all her students."

Ví dụ: My favorite teacher was my high school English teacher because she made learning enjoyable and easy to understand by using real-life stories. Moreover, she was very supportive and caring towards all her students, which made the class environment warm and welcoming.

Gợi ý: Focus on improving sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. For example, you can say: "Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. We occasionally exchange messages and greetings. She also calls me on my birthday to wish me well, and we share updates about our lives. We have a close friendship."

Ví dụ: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher. We occasionally exchange messages and greetings. Additionally, she calls me on my birthday to wish me well, and we often share updates about our lives. We have developed a close friendship over the years.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar to express your ideas more effectively. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. For example: "My teacher was a good role model who helped me improve my vocabulary and English speaking skills. Moreover, she taught us proper manners and discipline as students."

Ví dụ: My teacher was a good role model who helped me improve my vocabulary and English speaking skills. Moreover, she taught us proper manners and discipline, which helped me become a better student overall.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear reasons. For example: "Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future. I have a master's degree in nursing, which will help me teach effectively. I want to help students learn many things so they can achieve their goals."

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future. Since I have a master's degree in nursing, I believe I can teach effectively. I want to help students learn many things so they can pursue their dreams and succeed.

× Yes, I have a favorite teacher and she is my English teacher when I was a high school.

✓ Yes, I have a favorite teacher and she was my English teacher when I was in high school.

The phrase 'when I was a high school' is incorrect because 'high school' is a place, not a person. The correct expression is 'when I was in high school'. Also, the tense should be past 'was' to match the time frame.

× She used real life stories and concepts so that the so that the students will be understand of what her teaching outside of work.

✓ She used real life stories and concepts so that the students would understand what she was teaching outside of work.

The phrase 'will be understand of' is incorrect. The correct form is 'would understand'. Also, 'what her teaching' should be 'what she was teaching' to correctly express the action.

× She's heartwarming and supportive to all her students.

✓ She is warm-hearted and supportive to all her students.

'Heartwarming' is usually used to describe situations or events, not people. The correct adjective to describe a person is 'warm-hearted'.

× Yes I'm still in touch with my teacher occasionally I'm sending her message and at times she will send to me well wishers and greetings.

✓ Yes, I'm still in touch with my teacher. Occasionally, I send her messages and at times she sends me well wishes and greetings.

The use of 'I'm sending' and 'she will send' is incorrect here. The simple present tense 'I send' and 'she sends' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× Additionally she will call me back also to greet my birthdays and update her life.

✓ Additionally, she also calls me back to greet me on my birthdays and update me about her life.

The phrase 'greet my birthdays' is incorrect; it should be 'greet me on my birthdays'. Also, 'update her life' should be 'update me about her life' to indicate the information is being shared with the speaker.

× So me and my teachers is is like a best friends and we're.

✓ So my teacher and I are like best friends.

The subject 'my teacher and I' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'me and my teachers' is incorrect; the correct subject pronoun is 'my teacher and I'. The phrase 'is is' is a repetition error.

× My teacher helped me to be a good role model and able to teach me many learning such As for vocabularies, the way the way the English teachings and speaking.

✓ My teacher helped me become a good role model and taught me many things such as vocabulary, English teaching methods, and speaking skills.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Able to teach me many learning' is incorrect; it should be 'taught me many things'. Also, 'such As for vocabularies' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'such as vocabulary'.

× Aside from that, she will teach us a proper manner as a student and moreover.

✓ Aside from that, she taught us proper manners as students.

The phrase 'she will teach' should be past tense 'she taught' to match the context. 'A proper manner as a student' is incorrect; it should be 'proper manners as students'. The word 'moreover' is unnecessary and incomplete here.

× Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future someday.

✓ Yes, I want to be a teacher someday in the future.

The phrase 'in the future someday' is redundant. 'Someday in the future' or simply 'someday' is sufficient.

× Currently I have a degree of the master in nursing so that it allows me to be a teacher someday.

✓ Currently, I have a master's degree in nursing, which allows me to become a teacher someday.

The phrase 'a degree of the master in nursing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a master's degree in nursing'. Also, 'so that it allows me' is better expressed as 'which allows me'.

× I want to be a teacher someday because so that I can help the students to learn many things and and they can do whatever they want.

✓ I want to be a teacher someday so that I can help students learn many things and they can do whatever they want.

The phrase 'because so that' is redundant; only one conjunction is needed. Also, 'the students' can be simplified to 'students'. The repeated 'and' is an error.