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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you have a favourite teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a favorite teacher and her name is Lily. She's my Senior High School tennis teacher. Because I love her because she is very kindness and patient especially when I have some difficulties, she always encourage me and give me some advice.

Giám khảo

Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?

Thí sinh

Now I have lost touch with my primary school teacher. Back then I didn't have any contact information like phone numbers, so it was difficult to keep in touch.

Giám khảo

In what way did your favourite teacher help you?

Thí sinh

Well, my favorite teacher always help me a lot. It's not only in the in my study but also when I faced some emotional damage. She also comfort me and give me some useful advice.

Giám khảo

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was a child, my dream was to be a teacher because student is both enjoyable and interesting. When seeing seeing these students progress, I think I am very happy.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you have a favourite teacher?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和用词需更准确,避免重复表达,如“because I love her because”。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is Lily, my Senior High School tennis coach. I admire her because she is very kind and patient. Whenever I face difficulties, she encourages me and offers helpful advice.

Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然流畅,同时丰富细节。

Ví dụ: No, I have lost touch with my primary school teacher because I didn't have her contact information, such as phone numbers, which made it hard to keep in touch.

In what way did your favourite teacher help you?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 注意语法错误,如动词时态和单复数形式。表达应更具体,避免模糊词汇如“emotional damage”,可用更贴切的词汇。

Ví dụ: My favourite teacher has helped me a lot, not only with my studies but also emotionally. She comforts me when I feel upset and gives me valuable advice.

Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇,表达不够清晰。建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达自己的想法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I find teaching enjoyable and interesting. Seeing my students make progress would make me very happy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Because I love her because she is very kindness and patient especially when I have some difficulties, she always encourage me and give me some advice.

Because I love her because she is very kind and patient especially when I have some difficulties, she always encourages me and gives me some advice.

这里“kindness”是名词,应该用形容词“kind”来修饰人;“patient”是形容词,正确。动词“encourage”和“give”需要加第三人称单数形式“encourages”和“gives”,因为主语是单数的“she”。

Third person singular issue

× Well, my favorite teacher always help me a lot.

Well, my favorite teacher always helps me a lot.

主语是单数第三人称“my favorite teacher”,动词“help”应加-s变为“helps”,以符合主谓一致规则。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It's not only in the in my study but also when I faced some emotional damage.

It's not only in my study but also when I faced some emotional damage.

“in the in my study”中“the”多余,应去掉。

Third person singular issue

× She also comfort me and give me some useful advice.

She also comforts me and gives me some useful advice.

主语“she”是第三人称单数,动词“comfort”和“give”应加-s变为“comforts”和“gives”,以保持主谓一致。

Singular and plural issue

× because student is both enjoyable and interesting.

because students are both enjoyable and interesting.

“student”应为复数形式“students”,因为指的是一类人;动词“is”应改为复数形式“are”,以保持主谓一致。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× When seeing seeing these students progress, I think I am very happy.

When seeing these students progress, I think I am very happy.

“seeing”重复出现,应去掉一个。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
InterestingAbsorbing
LostMissing; Off course; Missed; Bygone; Extinct
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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