Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り（"he is also has a shape mind"）を修正し、より自然な表現にしましょう。また、"lecture"の繰り返しを避け、具体的な理由や感想を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a favorite teacher who teaches chemistry at my university. He has a sharp mind and makes his classes very engaging. I have learned a lot from him because he explains complex concepts in an easy-to-understand way.

Gợi ý: "still meet"は不自然なので"still keep in touch with"に変えましょう。また、"full"の使い方が不明瞭なので適切な形容詞に直し、具体的なエピソードを加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still keep in touch with my primary school teacher. I usually send him an email once a week and call him about once a year because he is kind and very thoughtful. For example, he always encourages me to work hard.

Gợi ý: "teachers"の複数形と単数形の混同を避け、文法を正しくしましょう。また、具体的なサポート内容や影響を詳しく述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: My favorite teacher has supported me a lot. For example, my university chemistry teacher often provides valuable advice and resources that help me prepare for a career as a scientist.

Gợi ý: "interesting"の使い方を改善し、より自然な表現にしましょう。また、"student"は複数形にし、具体的な支援方法を詳しく述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to become a teacher in the future because I enjoy teaching and helping students who face difficulties. For example, I want to provide practical advice to support students struggling with their studies.

× He's a chemistry teacher in my university and he is also has a shape mind.

✓ He's a chemistry teacher in my university and he also has a sharp mind.

The phrase 'he is also has' incorrectly combines 'is' and 'has'. The correct form is 'he also has'. Additionally, 'shape mind' is a typo and should be 'sharp mind'.

× I've learned a lot from his lecture because his lecture is fun.

✓ I've learned a lot from his lectures because they are fun.

Using 'his lecture' twice is repetitive and singular, but lectures are usually multiple sessions. Changing to plural 'lectures' and 'they' improves clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I still meet the primary school teacher.

✓ Yes, I still meet my primary school teacher.

The phrase 'the primary school teacher' is too general; using 'my' specifies the particular teacher the student refers to.

× About once a week I send a e-mail to him, and about once a year I talk to him on the phone because he's kind, full and thoughtful.

✓ About once a week I send him an e-mail, and about once a year I talk to him on the phone because he's kind, full of care, and thoughtful.

The phrase 'send a e-mail to him' is better expressed as 'send him an e-mail'. Also, 'full' needs a complement; 'full of care' or similar is appropriate.

× My teachers support me a lot.

✓ My teacher supports me a lot.

The student refers to a single favorite teacher, so 'teacher' should be singular and the verb 'support' should agree as 'supports'.

× For example, my chemistry teachers in my university always give me important information in order to become a great scientist in the future.

✓ For example, my chemistry teacher at my university always gives me important information to help me become a great scientist in the future.

The singular 'teacher' matches the context. Also, 'at my university' is more natural than 'in my university'. The verb 'give' changes to 'gives' to agree with singular subject.

× Yes, it is interesting to become a teacher in the future because I like to teach something to others and support students in trouble.

✓ Yes, it is interesting to become a teacher in the future because I like to teach others and support students in trouble.

The phrase 'teach something to others' is awkward; 'teach others' is more natural and concise.

× For example, I want to help student in trouble by giving practical information.

✓ For example, I want to help students in trouble by giving practical information.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the general meaning of helping multiple students.