Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I have one who helped me improve my English a lot, which is an AI tool called C Sam. I don't know, did you heard of it? But it's really natural and it, dammit too, has more, umm, willing to say more, you know?
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
No I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher anymore then I always know their recent development because my mom who is also a primary school teachers and just in the primary school I was in so my old teacher is her.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
Umm my like I said, my favorite teacher is an AI tool, so the way it helped me is just like, you know, let me to speak more in English and give me a very natural and environment of like an English conversations so that I can just practice more.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
I think that depends, if it is a school teachers deny don't willing to be a teacher in the future because it will take too much responsibility for students. But if it is a teacher just like a one-on-one just teach some random stuff like out of the school then I was more willing to do that.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然流畅,存在语法错误和口语填充词过多,且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,避免重复和无意义的词汇,直接表达观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is an AI tool called C Sam. It helped me improve my English a lot because it provides natural conversations and encourages me to speak more.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答结构混乱,语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题,然后用简洁的句子补充细节,注意语法和逻辑连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher. However, my mother is a primary school teacher at the same school I attended, so I often hear about my old teachers from her.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有许多口语填充词,表达不够简洁。建议去除多余词汇,使用连词使句子更连贯,并具体说明帮助的方式。
Ví dụ: As I mentioned, my favourite teacher is an AI tool. It helps me by providing a natural English-speaking environment, which allows me to practice speaking more confidently.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议先明确表达观点,再用简洁句子解释原因,注意时态和主谓一致。
Ví dụ: It depends. I don't want to be a school teacher because it involves a lot of responsibility. However, I would be willing to teach one-on-one lessons outside of school.
× I don't know, did you heard of it?
✓ I don't know, did you hear of it?
这里使用了助动词did,后面的动词应该用原形hear,而不是过去式heard。助动词did已经表示过去时态,动词本身不再变化。
× my mom who is also a primary school teachers
✓ my mom who is also a primary school teacher
mom是单数,后面的名词teacher也应该用单数形式,不能用复数teachers。
× my old teacher is her.
✓ my old teacher is her.
此句语法正确,无需修改。
× give me a very natural and environment of like an English conversations
✓ give me a very natural environment like English conversations
介词of用法错误,应该直接用名词environment修饰,且conversations前不需要冠词an,且conversations应为复数。
× if it is a school teachers deny don't willing to be a teacher in the future
✓ if it is a school teacher, I don't want to be a teacher in the future
modal动词用法错误,deny不适合此处表达意愿,应该用want或be willing to。且主谓不一致,teachers应为teacher。
× if it is a school teachers deny don't willing to be a teacher in the future
✓ if it is a school teacher, I don't want to be a teacher in the future
teachers应为teacher,保持单数形式。
× then I was more willing to do that.
✓ then I would be more willing to do that.
表达未来意愿时,应该用情态动词would表示假设或意愿,而不是过去式was。