Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes of course I'm completely appreciate my math teacher. In the past I was very scared when math lessons came but now I'm more confident when doing math exam and can get high score.
Giám khảo
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Thí sinh
Not really. I heard that my primary school teacher had moved to say, your city of Vietnam. So when some special event or occasions like Teacher day or Ted holiday, I can't come back primary school to meet her.
Giám khảo
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Thí sinh
As I mentioned before, I was quite bad at math and often felt anxious whenever we had math lessons. Because of this, my favorite teacher organized small online meetings to give me extra support and explain the concepts more clearly so I could understand the material immediately. This personized attention really helped me improve my confidence.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, teaching is my dream job because I really want to share both my knowledge and emotions with my students and to help them learn better. Moreover, I hope to provide extra support to students who may struggle in class so they can feel more confident. However, I know that to become a good teacher, I need to develop a lot.
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Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết. Ví dụ, bạn có thể bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp và sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cảm xúc và kết quả học tập.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a favourite teacher, my math teacher. I used to be very scared of math lessons, but thanks to her support, I am now more confident and often get high scores in math exams.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Not really, because I heard that my primary school teacher has moved to another city in Vietnam. Therefore, I can't visit her during special occasions like Teacher's Day.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'personized' nên là 'personalized'. Bạn cũng nên thêm một câu kết để làm rõ kết quả của sự giúp đỡ đó.
Ví dụ: My favourite teacher helped me by organizing small online meetings to provide extra support and explain concepts clearly. This personalized attention greatly improved my understanding and boosted my confidence in math.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời tốt với ý tưởng rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên tránh dùng từ 'emotions' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này và thay bằng từ khác như 'passion' hoặc 'enthusiasm'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu về kế hoạch phát triển bản thân để làm câu trả lời hoàn chỉnh hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher because I want to share my knowledge and enthusiasm with students to help them learn better. I also hope to support those who struggle so they can gain confidence. To achieve this, I plan to improve my teaching skills continuously.
Ngữ pháp
× Yes of course I'm completely appreciate my math teacher.
✓ Yes of course I completely appreciate my math teacher.
The verb 'appreciate' should be in the base form after 'I' without 'am' because 'appreciate' is a stative verb and does not use the continuous form here.
× when math lessons came but now I'm more confident when doing math exam and can get high score.
✓ when math lessons came but now I'm more confident when doing math exams and can get high scores.
The nouns 'exam' and 'score' should be plural to match the general context of multiple exams and scores.
× I heard that my primary school teacher had moved to say, your city of Vietnam.
✓ I heard that my primary school teacher moved to, say, your city in Vietnam.
The past perfect 'had moved' is unnecessary here; simple past 'moved' is appropriate. Also, 'in Vietnam' is the correct preposition for locations.
× I can't come back primary school to meet her.
✓ I can't come back to primary school to meet her.
The preposition 'to' is required after 'come back' when indicating a place.
× This personized attention really helped me improve my confidence.
✓ This personalized attention really helped me improve my confidence.
The word 'personized' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'personalized'.
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