Teacher— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，且信息组织不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免无关描述，使用更准确的词汇和句式。

Ví dụ: Yes, my favourite teacher is my English teacher because she is kind and assigns less homework, which made learning enjoyable for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still remember my primary school math teacher. She helped me a lot because I was not good at maths, and her support made me feel cared for.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和单复数，使用连接词，表达更具体和连贯。

Ví dụ: When I was in primary school, my math skills were poor, but my teacher never criticized me. She patiently answered my questions, which made me feel supported.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然，语法和句式有误。建议使用正确的时态和句型，表达更清晰，避免重复和冗余。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I wanted to be a teacher, but now I don't because teaching is busy and requires speaking loudly, which can harm the voice.

× Yes, my favorite teacher is English teacher.

✓ Yes, my favorite teacher is an English teacher.

这里缺少冠词“an”，因为“English teacher”是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词。

× She is a beautiful and gentle woman and the most important she gave us the least homework, so I liked her very much.

✓ She is a beautiful and gentle woman, and most importantly, she gave us the least homework, so I liked her very much.

句子结构不完整，“the most important”后缺少连接词和主语，需改为“most importantly”引导状语。

× She helped me a lot when I in primary school.

✓ She helped me a lot when I was in primary school.

描述过去的动作，缺少过去时态的动词“was”。

× I am not good at maths but she gives me help and warmth.

✓ I am not good at maths but she gives me help and warmth.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× When I in primary school, my mathematic is very terrible, but my teacher never criticism me and when I ask her my questions she usually answered me very patient.

✓ When I was in primary school, my mathematics was very terrible, but my teacher never criticized me and when I asked her my questions she usually answered me very patiently.

缺少过去时态动词“was”、“criticized”、“asked”、“answered”，形容词“terrible”用来描述数学成绩不合适，应为“mathematics”，副词“patiently”修饰动词。

× That makes me feel very warm.

✓ That made me feel very warm.

描述过去的感受，动词应使用过去时“made”。

× When I was a child, I want to be a teacher, but now I don't want be A to be a teacher, because I think to be a teacher is very busy and always to speak loudly, it is bad for our voice.

✓ When I was a child, I wanted to be a teacher, but now I don't want to be a teacher, because I think being a teacher is very busy and always requires speaking loudly, which is bad for our voice.

“want”应使用过去时“wanted”；“don't want be”缺少“to”；“A to be a teacher”结构错误；“to be a teacher is very busy”应改为“being a teacher is very busy”；“always to speak loudly”应改为“always requires speaking loudly”。