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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are the roads in the area where you live busy?

Thí sinh

Yes, sometimes the roads in my neighborhood are busy. Every week I can meet several traffic gyms. I think it is because in the rush hour, the traffic flow is out of control and the road is not well maintained. So I think the government should take responsibility to rebuild roads.

Giám khảo

Do people cross the road in the city where you live?

Thí sinh

Yes, many people cross the road in my city every day. In my neighborhood there are a lot of traffic lights and sometimes you can see police or volunteers help direct traffic so overall pedestrian safety can be ensured well.

Giám khảo

How is the condition of the roads in your city?

Thí sinh

Generally the roads in my city are fairly well maintained, but many central roads are quite old and in poor condition. You can often see workers preparing them which cause traffic delays. So I think the government should allocate more funding to regulate maintenance and upgrades.

Giám khảo

Do you think the roads in your city need improvement?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think the roads in my city need to be well maintained and repaired. You can always find tracks and potholes on some central roads. Besides, you can always see some walkers just repairing the roads there. I think the government should invest into.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are the roads in the area where you live busy?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 用词要准确,句子更简洁自然;避免错误单词(如“traffic gyms”应为“traffic jams”)并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。回答可以先给出总体观点,然后用一到两个具体原因支持,控制在最多五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, the roads near my home can get quite busy during peak hours. For example, I often encounter traffic jams on weekday mornings because the road layout cannot handle the large volume of cars. Therefore, I believe the local government should improve the infrastructure to ease congestion.

Do people cross the road in the city where you live?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但可更自然;注意用词搭配(如“ensure pedestrian safety”更自然),用连接词简洁扩展细节,并给出具体例子或频率来增加说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, many people cross the roads every day, especially near markets and schools. Fortunately, there are numerous traffic lights and occasionally volunteers or police who direct traffic, which helps ensure pedestrian safety.

How is the condition of the roads in your city?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 结构较好,但可更精炼并用更准确的词(如“cause traffic delays”改为“causing delays”),并补充具体例子或地点使内容更具体。保持句子不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Overall, most roads in my city are adequately maintained, but several main central roads are quite old and full of potholes. Roadworks are common and often cause delays, so the government should allocate more funds for regular maintenance and upgrades.

Do you think the roads in your city need improvement?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 句子不够自然且有语法错误(如“walkers”与语境不符,句尾不完整)。应先给直接观点,再用一两句具体例子支持,避免模糊词并完成句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Many central roads have deep potholes and cracked surfaces, which make driving uncomfortable and unsafe. Local authorities should increase investment in proper road repairs rather than temporary fixes.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Every week I can meet several traffic gyms.

Every week I encounter several traffic jams.

原句中使用了“traffic gyms”,这是拼写错误且名词不合适。应使用复数名词“traffic jams”(交通拥堵)。建议:注意单复数形式和拼写,常见搭配是“traffic jam(s)”来表示交通堵塞。

Third person singular issue

× I think it is because in the rush hour, the traffic flow is out of control and the road is not well maintained.

I think it is because during rush hour, the traffic flow is out of control and the roads are not well maintained.

原句中主语“the road”与上下文泛指道路不匹配,应使用复数“roads”。同时“in the rush hour”搭配更常用“during rush hour”。建议:注意单复数一致和固定搭配。

Modal verb usage

× So I think the government should take responsibility to rebuild roads.

So I think the government should take responsibility for rebuilding the roads.

动词短语搭配不当:“take responsibility to rebuild”应改为“take responsibility for rebuilding”,并在“roads”前加定冠词“the”以指代前文提到的道路。建议:学习常见短语动词搭配,如“take responsibility for + -ing”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× In my neighborhood there are a lot of traffic lights and sometimes you can see police or volunteers help direct traffic so overall pedestrian safety can be ensured well.

In my neighborhood there are a lot of traffic lights and sometimes you can see police or volunteers helping to direct traffic, so overall pedestrian safety can be ensured.

原句中“help direct”可以,但更自然的结构是“helping to direct”。此外句末“不需要‘well’”且“ensure”后直接接名词更合适。建议:使用现在分词短语连接动作,并删除多余副词。

Verb + -ing form

× You can often see workers preparing them which cause traffic delays.

You can often see workers repairing them, which causes traffic delays.

原句中“preparing them”用词不当,应为“repairing them”。从句中“which”指代单数或整体,“cause”需与主语“which”后的单数主语一致,因此用“causes”。建议:注意动词选择及主谓一致,非限定性定语从句的动词需与先行词一致。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× So I think the government should allocate more funding to regulate maintenance and upgrades.

So I think the government should allocate more funding for maintenance and upgrades.

动词“allocate funding to”之后常接人或机构,表示分配给谁;表示用途时应使用“allocate funding for + 名词/动名词”。建议:区分“allocate to”和“allocate for”的用法。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think the roads in my city need to be well maintained and repaired.

Yes, I think the roads in my city need to be well maintained and repaired.

此句本身结构和用词正确,无需修改。提供此条以说明句子符合题单中的介词/结构要求。

Singular and plural issue

× You can always find tracks and potholes on some central roads.

You can often find cracks and potholes on some central roads.

原句中“tracks”与道路破损语境不匹配,应使用“cracks”(裂缝)。此外“always”改为“often”更符合描述频率(可视为风格建议)。建议:选择与语境匹配的名词并注意频率副词的准确性。

Verb in the present participle form

× Besides, you can always see some walkers just repairing the roads there.

Besides, you can often see some workers repairing the roads there.

原句中“walkers”指行人,不适合表示修路的人,应为“workers”。“just”在此句多余且语气口语化,改为“often”更自然。建议:注意词汇语义,使用合适名词并调整副词以匹配正式回答语气。

Sentence structure errors

× I think the government should invest into.

I think the government should invest in them.

原句“invest into”后缺少宾语而且固定搭配为“invest in”表示投资于某事。需要补上宾语“them”或明确对象如“road maintenance”。建议:使用完整的句子结构并注意动词短语的宾语要求,例如“invest in road maintenance”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
PoorPoverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
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