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Part 1

Giám khảo

What do you usually do on your birthday?

Thí sinh

Oh I love my birthday so much and I'm so happy on my birthday always. I owe my birthday I usually. No. I have a party on my birthday and I will have fun. I have fun on my with my friends. I don't know.

Giám khảo

What did you do on your birthday when you were young?

Thí sinh

Oh, when I was a child. Oh, instead of my friends, no, my relative comes to me.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?

Thí sinh

Yes, so I think it's important for every person because it's our day and I think everybody celebrate to his birthday.

Giám khảo

Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?

Thí sinh

Oh, China? I don't know, really.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

What do you usually do on your birthday?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Try to give a clear and structured answer. Start with a direct response, then add specific details about your birthday activities. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I usually have a party on my birthday with my friends. We play games and eat delicious food, which makes me very happy.

What did you do on your birthday when you were young?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Provide a complete sentence that directly answers the question. Use linking words to connect ideas and give specific details about your childhood birthday celebrations.

Ví dụ: When I was young, my relatives used to come to my house to celebrate my birthday with me, and we would have a big family meal together.

Do you think it is important for you to celebrate your birthday?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and adding specific reasons why birthdays are important. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating birthdays is important because it is a special day to appreciate life and spend time with loved ones.

Whose birthday do you think is the most important to celebrate in China?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Try to give an opinion even if you are unsure. You can mention a common cultural practice or a famous person's birthday and explain why it is important.

Ví dụ: In China, I think the most important birthdays to celebrate are those of elders, because respecting older people is a big part of our culture.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× I owe my birthday I usually.

I usually celebrate my birthday.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and lacks clarity. The phrase 'I owe my birthday I usually' is not grammatically correct. The correct structure is 'I usually celebrate my birthday,' which clearly expresses the intended meaning.

Sentence structure errors

× I have fun on my with my friends.

I have fun on my birthday with my friends.

The original sentence is missing the word 'birthday' after 'my' which causes confusion. Adding 'birthday' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× instead of my friends, no, my relative comes to me.

Instead of my friends, my relatives come to me.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'relative' in singular form and the phrase 'no' is unnecessary and confusing. 'Relatives' should be plural to match the context, and the sentence should be clear and concise.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think everybody celebrate to his birthday.

I think everybody celebrates their birthday.

The verb 'celebrate' needs to be in third person singular form 'celebrates' to agree with 'everybody.' Also, 'celebrate to his birthday' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'celebrates their birthday' to be gender-neutral and grammatically correct.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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