Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using complete sentences and proper linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words like 'then' or 'after that'.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually go to church to pray and thank God. Then, my family and I cook our favorite Filipino dishes such as macaroni, spaghetti, pancit, and adobo. After that, we enjoy eating together and celebrating the day.

Gợi ý: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, try to avoid unclear phrases and be specific about your experiences.

Ví dụ: When I was young, my birthday was just like a normal day because my family couldn't afford a big party. However, I enjoyed attending children's parties sometimes, which made me happy and helped me feel special.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by using correct sentence structures and linking words. Express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons in a logical way.

Ví dụ: I don't think it is important to celebrate my birthday with a party. For me, the most important thing is to pray and thank God for giving me another chance to live and be blessed.

Gợi ý: Try to answer the question directly and clearly. If you don't know the answer, you can say so politely and briefly. Avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: I am not sure whose birthday is the most important to celebrate in China because I have never been there. I live in the Philippines, so I don't know much about their traditions.

× During my birthday I usually go to church at a pray and thank God and.

✓ During my birthday I usually go to church to pray and thank God.

The phrase 'at a pray' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to pray' using the infinitive verb form after 'go to church'. This is a common structure in English where 'go to' is followed by the base verb to indicate purpose.

× As we celebrate my birthday we are going to cook our favorite food which is macaroni, spaghetti and pancit and adobo which is Filipino food to end.

✓ As we celebrate my birthday, we cook our favorite foods, which are macaroni, spaghetti, pancit, and adobo, which are Filipino foods, to end the day.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Are going to cook' suggests future tense but the context is habitual. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' because multiple foods are mentioned. The phrase 'to end' is incomplete and needs clarification, so 'to end the day' is added for clarity.

× After that we are eat with my.

✓ After that, we eat together.

The sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. 'We are eat' is wrong; it should be 'we eat'. Also, 'with my' is incomplete and unclear. Simplifying to 'we eat together' makes the sentence correct and clear.

× When I was young, during my birthday is it's just like a normal day for me because we don't have money to celebrate or to make a big party for my birthday.

✓ When I was young, my birthday was just like a normal day for me because we didn't have money to celebrate or to make a big party for my birthday.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the time frame is past ('when I was young'), verbs should be in past tense: 'was' instead of 'is', and 'didn't have' instead of 'don't have'. Also, 'it's' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× That is why when, when? Ice, I attend children's party.

✓ That is why, when I was young, I attended children's parties.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'when? Ice'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses past tense 'attended' to match the time frame. Also, 'children's party' is pluralized to 'children's parties' for generality.

× I think it heals my inner child for me.

✓ I think it heals my inner child.

The phrase 'for me' is redundant after 'I think'. Removing it makes the sentence clearer and more natural.

× For me is it is not important to celebrate my birthday because the most important thing during my birthday is to pray and thank God that he.

✓ For me, it is not important to celebrate my birthday because the most important thing during my birthday is to pray and thank God that He

The sentence has word order issues; 'is it is' should be 'it is'. Also, 'God that he' is incomplete; 'He' should be capitalized as a pronoun referring to God. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as much as possible.

× Give me another chance and opportunity to live in this world and to be blessed by him.

✓ has given me another chance and opportunity to live in this world and to be blessed by Him.

The verb 'Give' should be in the present perfect tense 'has given' to indicate an action that has relevance to the present. Also, 'him' referring to God should be capitalized as 'Him'.

× For me, I don't know if who's birthday is in is the most important to celebrate in China because I don't even go there.

✓ For me, I don't know whose birthday is the most important to celebrate in China because I don't even go there.

The phrase 'if who's birthday is in is' is incorrect. 'Who's' is a contraction for 'who is' and should be 'whose' to indicate possession. Also, 'in is' is redundant and incorrect.

× And I don't know who is the most important person there in their country because I am leave.

✓ And I don't know who is the most important person there in their country because I live here.

The phrase 'I am leave' is incorrect; the correct present tense form is 'I live'. The sentence is corrected to reflect proper verb usage.

× I am living here in the Philippines.

✓ I live here in the Philippines.

While 'I am living' is grammatically correct, the simple present 'I live' is more appropriate for a permanent situation like residence.