Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“by a big cake”应为“buy a big cake”，句子结构不完整。建议你直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually prefer a quiet day. Instead of having a big party or buying a large cake, I like to send messages to my friends and receive their wishes. This simple way makes me feel happy and appreciated.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和不连贯的表达，如“the celebrating my birthday”和“You really?”不合适。建议使用正确的时态和连词，表达更清晰具体。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I really enjoyed celebrating my birthday because my parents allowed me to eat many snacks and cakes. Besides that, I played games with my friends and had a small birthday party at home.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，如“Unul”、“celebrate my person”等。建议直接表达观点，使用正确的语法和连接词，使回答更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, it is not very important for me to celebrate my birthday. I feel indifferent about it. Although I liked birthday parties when I was a child, now as an adult, I prefer to spend the day quietly.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议明确指出重要的生日对象，使用完整句子和连接词，提供具体理由。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, the most important birthdays to celebrate in China are those of the elders in the family, such as fathers and grandparents. This is because respecting and honoring older family members is a traditional value in Chinese culture.

× I don't like to have a big party or by a big cake.

✓ I don't like to have a big party or buy a big cake.

The verb 'by' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'buy'. This is a spelling mistake rather than a grammar problem, but it affects the verb form and meaning.

× I don't like do that, instead I like to send messages to my friends and receive their wishes and that is enough for me.

✓ I don't like to do that; instead, I like to send messages to my friends and receive their wishes, and that is enough for me.

The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to do' or 'doing'. Here, 'to do' is correct. Also, punctuation is added for clarity.

× Makes me feel happy and.

✓ It makes me feel happy.

The sentence lacks a subject and is incomplete. Adding 'It' as the subject and removing the trailing 'and' corrects the sentence structure.

× I really enjoyed the celebrating my birthday 'cause my parents allowed me to eat a lot of snacks and cakes.

✓ I really enjoyed celebrating my birthday because my parents allowed me to eat a lot of snacks and cakes.

The definite article 'the' before 'celebrating' is incorrect. 'Enjoy' is followed by a gerund without 'the'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate.

× You really?

✓ Did you really?

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'Did' forms a proper question.

× Besides that I play the game with my friends and had a little birthday party at home.

✓ Besides that, I played games with my friends and had a little birthday party at home.

The verb tense should be past ('played') to match 'had'. Also, 'games' is plural to match 'friends' and common usage.

× Unul In my opinion it is not important for me to celebrate my person.

✓ In my opinion, it is not important for me to celebrate my birthday.

'Unul' is unclear and likely a typo. 'My person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'my birthday'.

× I'm indifferent with it as I saw it.

✓ I'm indifferent to it as I see it.

The correct preposition after 'indifferent' is 'to', not 'with'. Also, 'saw' should be 'see' to match present tense.

× Although I was like to celebrate birthday party when I was a kid but now I'm an adult I just want spend the day quietly even the birthday.

✓ Although I liked to celebrate birthday parties when I was a kid, now that I'm an adult, I just want to spend the day quietly, even on my birthday.

'Was like' is incorrect; it should be 'liked'. 'Celebrate birthday party' should be 'celebrate birthday parties'. 'Want spend' should be 'want to spend'. Added commas and prepositions for clarity.

× Well, in my opinion, the most important birthdays to celebrate its.

✓ Well, in my opinion, the most important birthdays to celebrate are those of

'Its' is incorrect here; the sentence is incomplete and needs a proper subject and verb.

× It's father, oldest family members.

✓ It's the father's and oldest family members' birthdays.

The sentence lacks possessive forms and articles. 'Father' should be 'father's' and 'oldest family members' should be possessive.

× Becaused you relate that turn into.

✓ Because you relate to those milestones.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Corrected to a proper sentence with correct conjunction and verb.

× Six days, 7 T even 90 years old at that.

✓ Whether it's six days, seven, or even 90 years old, they are celebrated.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reconstructed to a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.