Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state what you do on your birthday, use correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually invite my close friends and family over. We enjoy cake and decorate the house with balloons. It's a joyful time to celebrate together and share happiness.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear, complete response with proper sentence structure. Mention specific activities you did and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I celebrated my birthday by going to new restaurants or cafes with my family and friends. We would have fun together, which made the day very special for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and making the sentences more concise. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, celebrating my birthday is important to me because it allows me to share happiness with family and friends. Moreover, it creates memorable moments and gives me a chance to reflect on the past year while looking forward to new experiences.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question, and if you don't know, briefly state that, then relate it to your own experience. Use complete sentences and linking words.

Ví dụ: I'm not very familiar with birthday traditions in China, so I can't say whose birthday is most important there. However, in my country, we usually celebrate the birthdays of close family members and loved ones because family is very important to us.

× Well, I usually give some cake and balloons and invites my favorite ones to celebrate my special day, which is so interesting to be with my family and share our hapiness together.

✓ Well, I usually give some cake and balloons and invite my favorite ones to celebrate my special day, which is so interesting to be with my family and share our happiness together.

The verb 'invites' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'invite' without 's'. Also, 'hapiness' is a spelling error and should be 'happiness'. The verb form must agree with the subject in number and person.

× Well, I thought. It was so special to me and at that moment I. And choose doing my favorite things such as some knew restaurant or cafe and being with my friends or families and have fun an.

✓ Well, I thought it was so special to me and at that moment I chose to do my favorite things such as going to some new restaurant or cafe and being with my friends or family and having fun.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'choose' should be past tense 'chose' to match the past context; 'doing' should be 'to do' or 'doing' with proper structure; 'knew' is a misspelling of 'new'; 'families' should be 'family' as a collective noun here; 'have fun an' is incomplete and should be 'having fun'. The verbs and nouns must be in correct tense and form to convey past actions clearly.

× Yes, so far is it is important to me. Celebrating my birthday is a special way to share my happiness with family and friends and it creates memorable moments that they cherish. It also gives me a chance to reflect on the past year and look forward to new experiences and have more fun with my best ones.

✓ Yes, so far it is important to me. Celebrating my birthday is a special way to share my happiness with family and friends and it creates memorable moments that they cherish. It also gives me a chance to reflect on the past year and look forward to new experiences and have more fun with my best ones.

The phrase 'so far is it is important to me' is incorrect in word order. The correct form is 'so far it is important to me'. This is a present tense statement expressing current importance, so the verb order must be subject + verb.

× Well, I don't know about their culture and their society and donations, so I have no idea about that. But in my country I think it is important to celebrate. Birthday, a well loved ones and obviously our family which is important.

✓ Well, I don't know about their culture and their society and traditions, so I have no idea about that. But in my country, I think it is important to celebrate birthdays, well-loved ones, and obviously our family, which is important.

The word 'donations' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'traditions'. 'Birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' when speaking generally. 'A well loved ones' is incorrect because 'ones' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The sentence needs plural forms and correct article usage to be grammatically correct.