Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to form complete sentences and connect ideas smoothly to sound more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I usually have a small gathering at home with my family and a couple of friends because I enjoy celebrating in a cozy environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to make your answer coherent and specific.

Ví dụ: When I was younger, my parents usually threw me a small birthday party, and all of my friends from school were invited, which made it very fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer is fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and explain your opinion clearly with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: In our culture, I think it is very important to celebrate birthdays because it reminds us that we have been given another chance to live and appreciate life.

Gợi ý: Try to ask for clarification politely if you don't understand a question, but also attempt to answer based on your knowledge to show communication skills.

Ví dụ: Could you please repeat the question? If you mean whose birthday is most important in China, I think it is the elders' birthdays because respecting elders is a big part of our culture.

× I with my family and a couple of friends and that's how I usually celebrate my birthday.

✓ I am with my family and a couple of friends, and that's how I usually celebrate my birthday.

The original sentence is missing a verb, causing a sentence structure error. Adding the verb 'am' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× When I was younger my parents would usually throw me a small birthday party and all of my friends at school or invited and it's just fun.

✓ When I was younger, my parents would usually throw me a small birthday party, and all of my friends at school were invited. It was just fun.

The original sentence has missing verbs and incorrect conjunctions, causing sentence structure errors. Adding 'were' after 'friends at school' and splitting into two sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In our culture, yes, I find it very important to celebrate our birthdays is a way of. Thinking. That you are still. Given a chance to live another year.

✓ In our culture, yes, I find it very important to celebrate our birthdays as a way of thinking that you are still given a chance to live another year.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves readability and grammatical correctness.