Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'usually' or 'also'.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually spend time with my friends and family. I also cut a cake and enjoy the celebration a lot.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on forming complete sentences and providing specific details. Use past tense consistently when talking about past events. Avoid irrelevant or confusing words.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to celebrate my birthday by cutting a cake with my family. We would have a small party and enjoy the day together.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short and unclear. Try to explain why you think it is important, using correct grammar and linking words. Provide reasons or feelings to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday because it only comes once a year. It is a special day to feel happy and spend time with loved ones.

Gợi ý: Instead of saying you don't know, try to give a general answer or express your opinion. You can also mention common practices or important birthdays if you know any. This shows your ability to handle questions even if you are unsure.

Ví dụ: I think the most important birthdays to celebrate in China are those of close family members, like parents or grandparents, because family is very important in Chinese culture.

× They got on my birthday, I spend my time with my friends and family.

✓ I get gifts on my birthday, and I spend my time with my friends and family.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'They got' which is unclear and likely a plural subject error. The correct singular subject 'I' should be used with the verb 'get' to indicate receiving gifts. Also, 'got' is past tense, but the question asks about usual activities, so present tense 'get' is appropriate.

× I usually. A cut a cake on my birthday.

✓ I usually cut a cake on my birthday.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly uses 'A cut a cake'. The article 'A' is unnecessary here and breaks the sentence structure. The corrected sentence is a complete statement with proper verb usage.

× And I enjoy a lot.

✓ And I enjoy it a lot.

The phrase 'enjoy a lot' is incomplete because 'enjoy' requires an object. Adding 'it' clarifies what is enjoyed, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× On my birthday when I were a child.

✓ On my birthday when I was a child.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past tense. The correct past tense form is 'was' for first person singular.

× And I will cut the cake and with my my family.

✓ And I would cut the cake with my family.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Will' is future tense, but the question asks about past events. 'Would' is more appropriate for past habitual actions. Also, 'and with my my family' is incorrect; 'with my family' suffices.

× Congratulations. 70. Medical.

✓ I am not sure what this means, so it cannot be corrected.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear, making it impossible to correct without additional context.

× Yes, it is important becaused this day come.

✓ Yes, it is important because this day comes.

'Becaused' is not a word; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'come' should be in present tense 'comes' to agree with singular subject 'this day'.

× On after one year and I can celebrate this day.

✓ After one year, I can celebrate this day.

The phrase 'On after one year' is incorrect. 'After one year' is the correct prepositional phrase. The sentence is about future possibility, so 'can celebrate' is appropriate.

× Sorry, I don't know how to celebrate birthday in China.

✓ Sorry, I don't know how birthdays are celebrated in China.

The original sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'birthday' and uses an incorrect structure. The corrected sentence uses passive voice to express the general practice of celebrating birthdays in China.