Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a topic sentence, then add supporting details logically.

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually start the day by thanking my parents for their support. Then, I celebrate with my family and friends by having a small party. I believe it's important to enjoy this special day with loved ones.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for better flow. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and be more specific about your feelings or experiences.

Ví dụ: When I was young, I used to give chocolates to my teachers and classmates to share my happiness. After returning home, I would cut a cake and enjoy a small party with my family and close friends, which made me feel very joyful.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks coherence and has grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, explain why the occasion is special to you with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is important because it is a special occasion to feel loved. I enjoy receiving gifts from my close friends and family, and I love cutting the cake and eating sweets. It makes me happy and strengthens my relationships.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and contains unclear phrases. Try to answer directly and clearly, explaining your opinion with reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: In China, I believe everyone's birthday is important to celebrate because it marks a special moment in their life. People usually cut cake and have a small party with close friends and family, which brings happiness and strengthens bonds.

× In the morning, first I was it good, Tara, and then I.

✓ In the morning, first I greeted Tara, and then I...

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear, lacking proper sentence structure. The phrase 'I was it good, Tara' is incorrect and confusing. It should be corrected to a clear action such as 'I greeted Tara' to make sense in context.

× Go to my parents to thank them and then I celebrate my birthday with my friends and my family because.

✓ I go to my parents to thank them and then I celebrate my birthday with my friends and my family because...

The sentence is missing a subject at the beginning and ends abruptly. Adding 'I' as the subject and completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It is your day and you should enjoy your special day.

✓ It is your day, and you should enjoy your special day.

A comma is needed before the conjunction 'and' to correctly join two independent clauses.

× And after that, when I came back, come back home, I used to cut a cake and have a small party with my family and friends.

✓ And after that, when I came back home, I used to cut a cake and have a small party with my family and friends.

The phrase 'came back, come back home' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the repeated phrase improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, definitely, it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday with 'cause it is a special occasion for me.

✓ Yes, definitely, it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday because it is a special occasion for me.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used before 'cause'. It should be removed to correctly connect the clauses.

× And I love to take gifts from my close friends and my family.

✓ And I love to receive gifts from my close friends and my family.

The verb 'take' is not appropriate in this context; 'receive' is the correct verb to express accepting gifts.

× And I love to cut cake.

✓ And I love to cut the cake.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'cake' to specify the particular cake being referred to.

× And to eat sweets on my birthday and there's no restriction on your.

✓ And to eat sweets on my birthday, and there's no restriction on you.

The phrase 'restriction on your' is incorrect; it should be 'restriction on you'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.

× The cause? There's no restrictions to celebrate your birthday and you should cut cake and have a small party with your close friends and family members.

✓ Because there are no restrictions to celebrate your birthday, and you should cut the cake and have a small party with your close friends and family members.

'The cause?' is incorrect; 'Because' is the correct conjunction to explain the reason. Also, 'restrictions' is plural, so 'are' is used instead of 'is'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'cake'.