Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually enjoy eating the birthday cake. After that, I open gifts from my parents and friends, and finally, we take pictures to capture the happy moments.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不够准确，且缺少连接词，建议注意时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I usually enjoyed playing card games like Menology with my friends. After that, we would choose a film to watch together.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够清晰，建议注意语法和拼写，同时丰富理由表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday because it marks my growth and getting older. Besides, I feel happy to receive various gifts from my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，建议改进句子结构并使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: I think my mother's birthday is the most important to celebrate because she means a lot to me. Every year, I make a birthday cake by myself to celebrate her special day.

× Usually enjoy the birthday cake and then I will open all the gifts from my parents and my friends and finally we will take a picture to capture the happy moment.

✓ I usually enjoy the birthday cake, then I open all the gifts from my parents and my friends, and finally we take a picture to capture the happy moment.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应补充主语“I”，使句子完整通顺。

× Young, I usually enjoy the card games with my friends, such as Menology.

✓ When I was young, I usually enjoyed card games with my friends, such as Menology.

描述过去的习惯动作，应使用过去时态“enjoyed”，并且“Young”用法不当，应改为“When I was young”。

× After that we would choose a film to watch.

✓ After that, we would choose a film to watch.

句首缺少逗号，影响句子结构清晰。

× Yes, is very important for me to celebrate my birthday becauses it is assigned that I grew up and become elder.

✓ Yes, it is very important for me to celebrate my birthday because it signifies that I have grown up and become older.

句子缺少主语“it”，单词拼写错误“becauses”应为“because”，动词时态和词汇使用不当，应使用完成时“have grown up”和形容词“older”。

× Besides, I feel happy that I can receive many different gifts from my friends.

✓ Besides, I feel happy because I can receive many different gifts from my friends.

“that”连接词用法不当，应使用“because”表示原因。

× My mother's first day as a most important to celebrate because my mother is the most important person to me.

✓ My mother's birthday is the most important to celebrate because my mother is the most important person to me.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词“is”，并且“first day”用法不当，应改为“birthday”。

× And I will make a birthday cake by myself every year to celebrate her birthday party.

✓ I make a birthday cake by myself every year to celebrate her birthday.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“make”，去掉多余的“party”，使表达更自然。