Birthday— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并补充具体细节，避免无关内容。

Ví dụ: On my birthday, I usually have dinner with my best friends in a nicely decorated restaurant. They sing a birthday song for me, and I receive many gifts and good wishes.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达并注意语法。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I celebrated my birthday with my parents. My mother cooked a big dinner and made a birthday cake, while my father prepared a special surprise for me.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，存在语法和用词错误，建议简化句子并用准确的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think celebrating my birthday is very important because it marks the beginning of a new year in my life. I like to celebrate it with my close friends and family who bless me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容有意义，但句子结构和用词需改进，建议使用更自然的表达方式并注意语法。

Ví dụ: I believe my parents' birthdays are the most important to celebrate because they gave me life and raised me. They have always supported my dream of studying abroad.

× Are you really Catterall, my best friend together in a well decorated restaurant to have dinner and eat birthday cake.

✓ I usually celebrate my birthday with my best friend Catterall in a well-decorated restaurant to have dinner and eat birthday cake.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致句意不清。应明确主语和动作，使句子完整通顺。建议调整句子结构，明确表达庆祝生日的方式。

× At the time they were seeing a birthday song to me and I will receive a lot of gifts and blessings.

✓ At that time, they were singing a birthday song to me, and I received a lot of gifts and blessings.

动词短语使用错误，“seeing”应为“singing”，且时态应保持一致，描述过去发生的事情时应使用过去进行时和一般过去时。

× I spent time with my parents to celebrate my birthdate and my mother would make a big dinner to me and both the birthday cake to celebrate my birthday and my father would prepare a big surprise for me.

✓ I spent time with my parents to celebrate my birthday. My mother would make a big dinner for me and a birthday cake to celebrate, and my father would prepare a big surprise for me.

介词使用错误，“make a big dinner to me”应为“make a big dinner for me”，表达为“为我做晚餐”。句子过长且结构混乱，建议拆分成多个句子以增强表达清晰度。

× I suppose every of my birthday is vitally important because they represent the beginnings of mine you years and they are the special dates only belong to me.

✓ I suppose every one of my birthdays is vitally important because they represent the beginnings of my years and they are special dates that belong only to me.

量词使用错误，“every of my birthday”应为“every one of my birthdays”。此外，“mine you years”应为“my years”，表达所有格。句子中“only belong to me”应调整为“belong only to me”，语序更自然。

× I hope to be witness an blessed by my close friends an parents.

✓ I hope to be witnessed and blessed by my close friends and parents.

代词和动词形式错误，“be witness an blessed”应为“be witnessed and blessed”，动词需用过去分词形式构成被动语态。

× I think it is my parents birthday because my parents are one of the most important parent people in my life who gave me life and raised me up.

✓ I think it is my parents' birthday because my parents are some of the most important people in my life who gave me life and raised me.

单复数错误，“parents birthday”应为“parents' birthday”表示所有格；“parent people”应为“people”，去掉多余的“parent”。

× They also support my dream of going abroad to study.

✓ They also support my dream of going abroad to study.

该句无语法错误，保持原句。