Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“so I can access to the Internet”应为“so I could access the Internet”。建议注意时态一致性和介词使用，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet about 10 years ago when my father bought me my first mobile phone, which allowed me to access the Internet.

Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁，但“about 30 times a day recently”表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的时间频率表达，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Recently, I go online around 30 times a day, mainly to check and respond to emails for an international conference committee I am involved with.

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整且逻辑清晰，但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时增加具体细节使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. When I was in middle and high school, my parents and teachers didn't allow me to use the Internet because they believed it would negatively affect my studies.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“spend the most of time”应为“spend most of my time”。建议注意冠词和词组搭配，同时表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, recently I have been spending too much time online. However, since most of my time is dedicated to studying, I think it's acceptable.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整，如“As a postgraduate student, study English”缺少主语和谓语。建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性。

Ví dụ: Without the Internet, I would probably spend more time reading interesting and engaging novels like "Knit Women". As a postgraduate student, I would also focus more on studying English, which I believe is a great way to expand my vocabulary.

× so I can access to the Internet.

✓ so I could access the Internet.

这里是过去的情境，应该用情态动词的过去式could，而不是can。同时，动词access后不需要介词to。

× I use the e-mail a lot because I have to contact the committee of an international conference.

✓ I use e-mail a lot because I have to contact the committee of an international conference.

在这里，e-mail作为不可数名词使用时，不需要加定冠词the。

× I go online about 30 times a day recently.

✓ I have been going online about 30 times a day recently.

recently表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成进行时表示动作持续发生，而不是一般现在时。

× Yes, recently I spend too much time online.

✓ Yes, recently I have been spending too much time online.

recently表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成进行时表示动作持续发生，而不是一般现在时。

× However, I spend the most of time on my study so I think it's OK.

✓ However, I spend most of my time on my study so I think it's OK.

短语中不需要加定冠词the，应该是most of my time。

× As a postgraduate student, study English.

✓ As a postgraduate student, I study English.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应该加上主语I。