Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
When did you start using the internet?
Thí sinh
I remember correctly the first times I use the Internet when I study shared science at primary school. That's in the great ways to communicate with other.
Giám khảo
How often do you go online?
Thí sinh
Eyes use the Internet every day, day by day because, uh, most of homework I must do it in the Internet and I just relax by social media like Facebook, TikTok, interim.
Giám khảo
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Thí sinh
Uh, I remember correctly when I, uh, didn't achieve their score and I just reached the low positions and my mother allowed can allow me to use the Internet.
Giám khảo
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Thí sinh
Actually is most optimes eyes spent on social media Uh, besides I study, I just relax through social media uh, or watch romantic movies.
Giám khảo
What would you do without the internet?
Thí sinh
Well when without the Internet I will do the traditional activities like dragon and snake or bamboo then. So it's many activities to play without the Internet.
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Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was in primary school. At that time, I used it mainly to study science and communicate with my classmates, which helped me learn better.
How often do you go online?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về tần suất sử dụng internet.
Ví dụ: I go online every day because I need the internet to do most of my homework. Besides studying, I also relax by browsing social media platforms like Facebook and TikTok.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về thời điểm và lý do bạn không được phép sử dụng internet.
Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a time when I didn't get good grades at school, so my mother didn't allow me to use the internet as a punishment.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và từ nối để liên kết ý, đồng thời cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho quan điểm của bạn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time online, especially on social media. Besides studying, I often relax by watching romantic movies or browsing social media platforms.
What would you do without the internet?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sử dụng từ nối và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về các hoạt động truyền thống bạn sẽ làm khi không có internet.
Ví dụ: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend my time doing traditional games like playing dragon and snake or bamboo games. There are many fun activities to enjoy without the internet.
Ngữ pháp
× I remember correctly the first times I use the Internet when I study shared science at primary school.
✓ I remember correctly the first times I used the Internet when I studied shared science at primary school.
The sentence describes past events, so the verbs 'use' and 'study' should be in the past tense 'used' and 'studied' to maintain correct tense consistency.
× That's in the great ways to communicate with other.
✓ That's a great way to communicate with others.
The original sentence has incorrect article usage and pluralization. 'That's' should be followed by 'a' (singular article) and 'ways' should be singular 'way' to match. Also, 'other' should be 'others' to refer to other people.
× Eyes use the Internet every day, day by day because, uh, most of homework I must do it in the Internet and I just relax by social media like Facebook, TikTok, interim.
✓ I use the Internet every day because most of my homework I must do on the Internet, and I just relax by using social media like Facebook, TikTok, and Instagram.
The pronoun 'Eyes' is incorrect and should be 'I'. 'Most of homework' needs a possessive pronoun 'my'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to the Internet. 'Interim' seems to be a mispronunciation of 'Instagram'. Also, 'do it in the Internet' is awkward; better to say 'do on the Internet'.
× Uh, I remember correctly when I, uh, didn't achieve their score and I just reached the low positions and my mother allowed can allow me to use the Internet.
✓ Uh, I remember correctly when I didn't achieve my score and I just reached low positions, and my mother didn't allow me to use the Internet.
The phrase 'didn't achieve their score' is incorrect; 'their' should be 'my' to match the subject. 'Allowed can allow me' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't allow me' to express prohibition in the past. Also, 'low positions' is acceptable but could be clearer.
× Actually is most optimes eyes spent on social media Uh, besides I study, I just relax through social media uh, or watch romantic movies.
✓ Actually, I spend most of my time on social media. Besides studying, I just relax through social media or watch romantic movies.
'Is most optimes eyes spent' is grammatically incorrect. The subject 'eyes' should be 'I'. The verb tense should be present simple 'spend'. 'Besides I study' should be 'Besides studying' to use the gerund form after 'besides'.
× Well when without the Internet I will do the traditional activities like dragon and snake or bamboo then.
✓ Well, without the Internet, I will do traditional activities like playing dragon and snake or bamboo games.
The sentence needs commas for clarity. 'Dragon and snake or bamboo then' is unclear; adding 'playing' and 'games' clarifies the meaning. The future tense 'will do' is correct here.
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