Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet in 2000 when a friend gave me a QQ number to chat with people worldwide.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达，避免重复，并注意句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I go online every day because the Internet has become an essential part of our daily lives for communication and work.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地说明时间和原因，避免重复和犹豫词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I wasn't allowed to use the Internet three months before the exam because my teacher wanted me to focus on studying.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，句子不完整。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复，并完整表达内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely spend too much time online, usually more than four hours a day chatting and browsing the internet.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有重复，表达不够清晰。建议完整表达想法，避免重复，并使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Without the Internet, my daily life would change a lot. For example, I would communicate less with my friends and spend more time reading paper books.

× I started using the Internet 2000 when my one of my friends sent me a QQ number and I use this number use this QQ number to chat online with friends all around the world.

✓ I started using the Internet in 2000 when one of my friends sent me a QQ number and I used this QQ number to chat online with friends all around the world.

句中“my one of my friends”结构不正确，应为“one of my friends”；“use this number use this QQ number”重复且时态错误，应改为过去时“used”。此外，年份前应加介词“in”。

× Actually, I go online every day because you know, the Internet now is become a necessary part of our daily life.

✓ Actually, I go online every day because, you know, the Internet now has become a necessary part of our daily life.

“is become”是错误的时态搭配，应使用现在完成时“has become”表示从过去到现在的变化。

× We have to rely on the Internet to deal with the daily communication and and work so.

✓ We have to rely on the Internet to deal with daily communication and work.

“and and work so”重复且“so”多余，应删除。句中“have to”用法正确。

× It was umm 3 months before the the the exam and my teacher asked me not to use the Internet and so I can I can.

✓ It was umm 3 months before the exam and my teacher asked me not to use the Internet, so I couldn't.

“the the the”重复，应删去多余部分；“and so I can I can”表达不完整且时态错误，应改为“so I couldn't”表示过去不能做某事。

× Yes, definitely. I think now I spent too too too much time online.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think now I spend too much time online.

“now”表示现在时，动词应使用一般现在时“spend”，而非过去时“spent”。

× Actually now I spent more than 4 hours a day online, including chatting with others, surfing and.

✓ Actually, now I spend more than 4 hours a day online, including chatting with others and surfing.

“now”表示现在时，动词应使用一般现在时“spend”；句尾“surfing and.”不完整，应补充完整或去掉“and”。

× I think without Internet my daily life would change a lot.

✓ I think without the Internet my daily life would change a lot.

“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指互联网。

× For example, I will reduce the communication to my friends and I will spend more time reading paper books instead instead of.

✓ For example, I will reduce communication with my friends and I will spend more time reading paper books instead.

“reduce the communication to my friends”中介词用错，应为“communication with my friends”；“instead instead of”重复，应删去多余部分。