Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to start directly with the time you began using the internet and avoid repeating phrases like 'I enrolled in university' twice. Also, use linking words to make your answer flow better.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I began university, as we had a course where a tutor taught us how to use it effectively. Since then, I have been practising regularly to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks a clear direct response to the question. Try to begin with a specific frequency and then explain why. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and try to use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: I go online several times a day because I receive many emails and notifications from social media apps like WhatsApp, Telegram, and Instagram. In fact, I think I might be a bit addicted to my phone and the internet.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid hesitation. Also, try to be more specific about the situation and your feelings.

Ví dụ: Yes, during protests in my country, the internet was banned, so we lost access to much information. I remember feeling horrified because I couldn't communicate with my husband, which made the atmosphere quite gloomy for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases like 'I'm turning to flowers.' Try to express your ideas clearly and directly. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I find it hard to put my phone down. Sometimes, I feel like I miss out on real-life experiences when I am constantly checking my devices.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat vague and incomplete. Try to give a clear direct response and support it with specific activities you would do without the internet. Also, ensure correct grammar and sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Without the internet, I think it would be difficult at first, but I would adapt by reading novels, watching movies, and listening to music to keep myself entertained.

× it was banned to using Internet

✓ it was banned to use the Internet

After 'banned to', the verb should be in the base form, not the -ing form. The correct structure is 'banned to use'. Also, 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a specific noun.

× we didn't have access lots of information

✓ we didn't have access to lots of information

The phrase 'access' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'lots of information' is correct, but 'access' must be followed by 'to'.

× how we could use Internet

✓ how we could use the Internet

The word 'Internet' is a unique noun and should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× I believe that I'm addicted to my cell phones and Internet

✓ I believe that I'm addicted to my cell phone and the Internet

'Cell phone' is usually singular when referring to one's personal device. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I keep using my cell phones and I'm turning to flowers

✓ I keep using my cell phone and I'm turning to flowers

'Cell phone' should be singular when referring to one's own device. The phrase 'turning to flowers' is unclear but not a grammar issue here.

× I prefer to read novels and watching movies and listen

✓ I prefer to read novels, watch movies and listen

After 'prefer to', the verbs should be in the base form without '-ing'. Also, the sentence was incomplete; 'listen' should be followed by an object or rephrased.

× I prefer to read novels and watching movies and listen

✓ I prefer to read novels, watch movies and listen to music

After 'prefer to', verbs should be in base form, not '-ing'. Also, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' and an object to complete the meaning.