Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma thap clarity ra grammatical accuracy ko awashyakta cha. Sentence haru lai thik tarikale jodne ra thulo sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau. English ma 'I cannot I Moreover' jasto phrase haru avoid garnu parcha. Tapai le 'for example' jasto linking words prayog garna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: I started using the internet about 2-3 years ago. It has made my life much easier and more convenient. For example, I can easily text my friends and make phone calls. Moreover, I can complete my assignments with the help of the internet.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar thik cha tara thap linking words jastai 'because', 'so' ko prayog ramrari garnu parcha. Sentence haru lai thik tarikale jodne ra thulo sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau. Vocabulary ma thap variety lekhna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: I go online almost all the time because I stay at home and don't work. Therefore, I often scroll through Facebook and Instagram, chat with my friends, watch movies online, and play games with my siblings.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'rather rather' jasto repetition hataunu parcha. Linking words jastai 'because' ra 'so' ko prayog ramrari garnu parcha. Vocabulary ma thap variety lekhna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: During my school days, I was not allowed to use the internet because I had to focus on my studies instead of spending time on the internet or mobile phones. My parents did not buy me a mobile phone, so I used a laptop only to complete my assignments.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'I used mobile phone' bhanda 'I use my mobile phone' thik huncha. Linking words jastai 'because', 'so' ko prayog ramrari garnu parcha. Vocabulary ma thap variety lekhna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I don't have any work and I stay at home feeling bored. So, I use my mobile phone to scroll through Instagram and Facebook, but it is also affecting my health.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma repetition jastai 'It's it's' ra 'it is it will be' hataunu parcha. Sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banau. Linking words jastai 'because' ra 'and' ko prayog ramrari garnu parcha. Vocabulary ma thap variety lekhna saknuhunchha.

Ví dụ: It would be impossible for me to live without the internet because I am used to scrolling through social media and calling my friends. Without the internet, it would be quite difficult to stay at home with nothing to do.

× It's been 2-3 years I have been using the Internet and it has made my life so easier.

✓ It's been 2-3 years since I have been using the Internet and it has made my life so much easier.

The phrase 'so easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is a comparative adjective and requires a modifier like 'much' or 'a lot' to intensify it. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'since' to indicate the duration of time.

× I can easily text my friend and make a phone call.

✓ I can easily text my friends and make phone calls.

The singular 'friend' and 'a phone call' are less natural here because people usually text multiple friends and make multiple calls. Using plural forms 'friends' and 'phone calls' fits better in this context.

× I cannot I Moreover I can finish my assignment through the help of Internet.

✓ Moreover, I can finish my assignments with the help of the Internet.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I cannot I' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Assignments' is plural to match general usage. 'With the help of the Internet' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I'm always online 24/7 because I don't go to work, I stay at my home so I'm always scrolling my Facebook or Instagram or chatting with my friends and sometimes I watch movies online and play games with my siblings.

✓ I'm always online 24/7 because I don't go to work; I stay at home, so I'm always scrolling through Facebook or Instagram, chatting with my friends, sometimes watching movies online, and playing games with my siblings.

The sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. 'Scrolling my Facebook' should be 'scrolling through Facebook'. 'At my home' is better as 'at home'. Parallel structure is improved by listing activities with consistent verb forms.

× That was my school time that I was not allowed to use Internet because I have to focus on my study rather rather than spending time on Internet or mobile phones.

✓ That was my school time when I was not allowed to use the Internet because I had to focus on my studies rather than spending time on the Internet or mobile phones.

The phrase 'have to' should be in past tense 'had to' to match the past context. 'Study' should be plural 'studies'. 'Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. The repeated word 'rather' is corrected to a single 'rather'.

× My parents didn't allow me and buy me a mobile phones.

✓ My parents didn't allow me to buy a mobile phone.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Didn't allow me and buy me' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't allow me to buy'. 'Mobile phones' should be singular 'a mobile phone'.

× I have to use laptops to do my assignment as well.

✓ I had to use a laptop to do my assignments as well.

Since the context is past (school time), 'have to' should be 'had to'. 'Laptops' should be singular 'a laptop' unless multiple laptops are used. 'Assignment' is better as plural 'assignments'.

× Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I don't have any work to do and instead staying at home and I feel kind of bored.

✓ Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I don't have any work to do and instead stay at home, and I feel kind of bored.

The phrase 'instead staying' is incorrect; it should be 'instead stay' to maintain parallel verb form with 'don't have'.

× So I used mobile phone and scroll through the Instagram, Facebook and it's consuming my health too.

✓ So I use my mobile phone and scroll through Instagram and Facebook, and it's affecting my health too.

'Used' should be present tense 'use' to match the context. 'The Instagram, Facebook' is incorrect; no definite article is needed before social media names. 'Consuming my health' is unnatural; 'affecting my health' is better.

× It's it's impossible for me to stay without the Internet because it has become my habit to scroll through the social medias and call with my friends.

✓ It's impossible for me to stay without the Internet because it has become my habit to scroll through social media and call my friends.

Repeated 'It's' is an error. 'Social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable. 'Call with my friends' should be 'call my friends'.

× And it is it will be quite difficult for me without the Internet, staying home without any work to do.

✓ And it will be quite difficult for me without the Internet, staying home without any work to do.

The phrase 'it is it will be' is redundant; only 'it will be' is correct for future tense.