Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容丰富，但可以稍微简化句子结构，避免部分冗余，使表达更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet at about 12 years old, mainly for schoolwork and playing simple games. Since then, it has become essential for my learning and communication.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有条理，但开头句子有语法小错误，建议注意句子结构的准确性。

Ví dụ: I go online several times a day for both work and leisure. For example, I check emails and social media in the morning and evening, and I also watch videos or read news online.

Gợi ý: 回答中“clearly record time”表达不自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，同时注意句子流畅性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I clearly remember a time in my childhood when my parents restricted my Internet use because they thought it might affect my studies. They only allowed me to go online for educational purposes and limited recreational use.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但“effects”用词错误，应为“affects”，建议注意词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend a lot of time online, especially on entertainment and social media. For example, I often scroll through videos or chat with friends for hours, which sometimes affects my productivity. However, I also use the Internet for studying and staying informed.

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整且条理清晰，建议在句子连接处使用更多连接词，使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Without the Internet, my daily life would be much more challenging because I rely on it for communication, information, and entertainment. Therefore, I would have to find alternatives like reading books or meeting people face to face. Moreover, tasks such as online banking or shopping would become more time-consuming.

× I go online several times a day during for both work and leisure.

✓ I go online several times a day for both work and leisure.

句中“during for”是错误的介词搭配，应去掉“during”，只用“for”表示目的。

× Yes, I can clearly record time.

✓ Yes, I can clearly recall the time.

“record time”用法不当，表达“记得时间”应使用“recall”，且时态应与上下文一致。

× which sometimes effects my productivity.

✓ which sometimes affects my productivity.

“effects”是名词，正确动词形式应为“affects”，表示“影响”。