Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was in junior school. I was very young, and I used it to listen to music and play games. From that time, I realized the Internet would be an important part of my life.

Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回答问题，内容不连贯且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达频率和原因。

Ví dụ: I usually go online at school because we don't have a computer at home. Our teacher teaches us how to use the Internet during computer classes.

Gợi ý: 回答内容偏离问题，且语法错误较多。建议直接回答是否有过被禁止使用互联网的经历，并用清晰的句子表达。

Ví dụ: I can't remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet. I started using it more after I got my first mobile phone in senior school.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to spend too much time online. However, when I went to university, I realized there are more important things than staying online, so I changed my habits.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为混乱，表达不清晰。建议结构清晰地说明没有互联网时的学习和娱乐方式。

Ví dụ: Without the Internet, I would rely on books, newspapers, and magazines for my studies. For entertainment, I would spend time with my friends.

× I started using the Internet, was in my Junior School, I was a little little girl and the first time I contacted the word from the Internet and listen music, play games.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in my Junior School. I was a little girl, and the first time I contacted the world through the Internet, I listened to music and played games.

句子中缺少连接词，且动词时态不一致。'was in my Junior School'应加连接词'when'引导时间状语从句；'listen'和'play'应改为过去式'listened'和'played'，与过去时态保持一致。建议使用完整句子，避免句子碎片。

× I started using the Internet, was in my Junior School, I was a little little girl and the first time I contacted the word from the Internet and listen music, play games.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was in my Junior School. I was a little girl, and the first time I contacted the world through the Internet, I listened to music and played games.

介词使用错误，'contacted the word from the Internet'应为'contacted the world through the Internet'，表示通过互联网接触世界。

× Hmm, what's a way? Cus I I remembered 'cause I we don't have computer in my home.

✓ Hmm, what's the way? Because I remember we don't have a computer at my home.

代词使用错误，'I we'重复且混乱，应改为'I remember we'。另外，'a computer'前应加冠词，'in my home'应改为'at my home'。

× Cus I I remembered 'cause I we don't have computer in my home.

✓ Because I remember we don't have a computer at my home.

名词前缺少冠词，'computer'前应加不定冠词'a'。

× We just have the computer class in school and they teach our teacher taught us how to use the Internet, how to study in the Internet.

✓ We just had computer class in school, and our teacher taught us how to use the Internet, how to study on the Internet.

时态错误，描述过去的事情应使用过去时'had'和'taught'。

× how to study in the Internet.

✓ how to study on the Internet.

介词使用错误，通常说法是'study on the Internet'，表示在互联网上学习。

× I remembered not until the senior school that I have my first mobile phone and I use the Internet.

✓ I remember that not until senior school did I have my first mobile phone and use the Internet.

时态错误，'remembered'应为现在时'remember'，且句子结构不正确，使用倒装结构'did I have'更符合英语表达。

× I use a mobile phone to contact with my best friend after school.

✓ I use a mobile phone to contact my best friend after school.

动词'contact'后不需要介词'with'，直接加宾语即可。

× Even we saw each other every day 'cause we have plenty of things to talk, so it is a quite important memories.

✓ Even though we saw each other every day because we had plenty of things to talk about, so it is quite an important memory.

名词单复数错误，'memories'应为单数'memory'，且前面加不定冠词'an'。

× we have plenty of things to talk,

✓ we have plenty of things to talk about,

动词'talk'后需要介词'about'来引出谈论的内容。

× Umm, there upon time I really relied on Internet too much and uh, when I go to the university and I realize there are more important thing than staying on stay online, so I started to change.

✓ Umm, there was a time I really relied on the Internet too much, and when I went to university, I realized there were more important things than staying online, so I started to change.

时态错误，描述过去事件应使用过去时态，如'was','relied','went','realized'。

× more important thing than staying on stay online,

✓ more important things than staying online,

介词使用错误，'staying on stay online'应简化为'staying online'。

× Without saying the Internet, for my study there are a lot of paperwork,

✓ Without using the Internet, for my study there is a lot of paperwork,

介词短语错误，'Without saying the Internet'应为'Without using the Internet'，表示不使用互联网。

× for my study there are a lot of paperwork,

✓ for my study there is a lot of paperwork,

'paperwork'是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数'is'。

× I can search from library and also I read a book in the newspaper, magazine, can absorb some resources from a paper thing from entertainment and I have friends.

✓ I can search in the library and also read books, newspapers, and magazines. I can absorb some resources from paper materials for entertainment, and I have friends.

介词使用错误，'search from library'应为'search in the library'；'a book in the newspaper, magazine'表达不清，应分开说明；'paper thing from entertainment'表达不准确，应为'paper materials for entertainment'。