Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免无关开头，如“Where are you?”，并注意语法错误，如“I my parents gave me”应为“My parents gave me”。回答应更简洁自然，避免重复“at that time”。

Ví dụ: I started using the internet when I was 12 years old because my parents gave me a brand new computer as a birthday gift. Since then, I began exploring the internet regularly.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但开头“Will I go online”不自然，应直接回答。连接词使用合理，内容具体。建议注意句子开头的自然表达。

Ví dụ: I go online almost every day because the internet is essential in modern life. For example, I use it to communicate with friends, shop online, and sometimes for work or study.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且连贯，但“forbid me using the Internet”表达不够地道，建议改为“forbid me from using the Internet”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a time in junior high school when I wasn't allowed to use the internet because I had a lot of studying to do. However, I often spent too much time playing video games, so my parents forbade me from using the internet.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“I I”，“to to”，句子不完整。建议简洁表达，避免重复，注意语法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I spend too much time online. Not only do I play video games and watch movies, but I also use the internet to look up essays and complete my assignments.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且连贯，但“tune everything out”表达不够准确，建议使用“help me relax”或“help me clear my mind”。

Ví dụ: If I didn't have the internet, I would definitely spend more time at the gym to stay fit and maintain my energy levels. Going to the gym is a great way to keep healthy and relieve stress, which helps me relax and clear my mind.

× Where are you? I started using the computer when I was 12 years old.

✓ I started using the computer when I was 12 years old.

句子开头的“Where are you?”与上下文无关，导致句子结构混乱，应删除。

× At that time I my parents gave me a brand new computer as my birthday gift.

✓ At that time, my parents gave me a brand new computer as my birthday gift.

句子中“I my parents”结构错误，缺少逗号且多余的“I”应删除，保证句子结构正确。

× Will I go online almost every single day?

✓ I go online almost every single day.

此句为陈述句，错误使用了疑问句结构，应改为陈述句。

× my parents decided to forbid me using the Internet.

✓ my parents decided to forbid me from using the Internet.

动词forbid后应接介词from，表示禁止某人做某事，缺少from导致介词使用错误。

× Absolutely yes, because I just not only use the Internet to play video games or watch movies, I I also use the Internet to look up essays or you or use it to to help my complete my assignments.

✓ Absolutely yes, because I not only use the Internet to play video games or watch movies, but I also use it to look up essays or to help me complete my assignments.

句子结构混乱，存在重复词汇和不完整表达，应调整连接词和句子结构，使表达清晰。

× to help my complete my assignments.

✓ to help me complete my assignments.

此处“my”用作宾格错误，应使用宾格代词“me”。