Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“maybe at the beginning of the popularity of Internet”表达不清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和主谓一致。

Ví dụ: I started using the internet about ten years ago when it became popular. I remember my father bought me a computer, and I was very happy to play computer games for the first time.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“yesterday I go online was to play”不符合时态规则。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态，并避免冗余表达。

Ví dụ: I usually go online almost every day, mostly during the daytime. For example, yesterday I went online to play computer games and chat with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“go to online is allowed”不正确。建议使用更准确的句子结构，注意冠词和介词的使用，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Actually, I can't remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the internet because my parents think it helps with our studies. For example, I often use the internet to search for information instead of going to the library.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不准确，如“In Light”应为“online”，且句子结构混乱。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连贯的句子，并明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: It depends. Sometimes I spend a lot of time online because I do many things like playing games, searching for information, and chatting with friends. But other times, I avoid going online to relax.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“there are many things happened”应为“many things happen”，且表达不够具体。建议使用正确的时态和更具体的细节。

Ví dụ: To be honest, many things would still happen in our lives without the internet. For example, we could go running, relax, or visit the library to find information instead of searching online.

× It was 10 years old, and then my father bought a computer for me and I am very happy to play with computer games.

✓ I was 10 years old, and then my father bought a computer for me and I was very happy to play computer games.

这里的主语是“我”，应该用第一人称单数“I”，而不是“It”。另外，描述过去的状态时，动词时态应为过去式“was”。

× I can still remember yesterday I go online was to play computer games and chat with my friends online.

✓ I can still remember that yesterday I went online to play computer games and chat with my friends online.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去式“went”，而不是现在式“go”。

× Well, actually I can't remember it because in my home go to online is allowed by my parents because they think it is benefit for our study.

✓ Well, actually I can't remember it because going online at home is allowed by my parents since they think it is beneficial for our study.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和正确的动词形式。应使用动名词“going online”作主语，且“benefit”应改为形容词“beneficial”。

× For example, I often use Internet to search for some information instead of search references in library.

✓ For example, I often use the Internet to search for some information instead of searching for references in the library.

“use Internet”前应加定冠词“the”，动词“search”应使用动名词形式“searching”，并且“in library”应改为“in the library”，加上定冠词。

× I often go to In Light and spend my much time because I have a lot of things to do such as playing games, searching information, chatting with my friends.

✓ I often go online and spend much of my time because I have a lot of things to do such as playing games, searching for information, and chatting with my friends.

“go to In Light”应为“go online”，且“spend my much time”表达错误，应为“spend much of my time”。“searching information”应为“searching for information”。

× To be honest there are many things happened in our life.

✓ To be honest, many things have happened in our lives.

“things happened”应使用现在完成时“have happened”，并且“life”应使用复数“lives”表示每个人的生活。

× If we don't have Internet, we will have lot of things to do.

✓ If we don't have the Internet, we will have a lot of things to do.

“Internet”前应加定冠词“the”，并且“lot of things”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× For example we can running, relaxing and staying at library to search information instead of looking for reference online.

✓ For example, we can run, relax, and stay at the library to search for information instead of looking for references online.

“can”后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式“running”，应改为“run”。“at library”应加定冠词“the library”，并且“search information”应为“search for information”。