Internet— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且直接，但可以增加更多细节使内容更丰富，例如描述当时使用互联网的感受或具体做了什么。

Ví dụ: I started using the Internet when I was 10 years old. At that time, I created my first social media account to chat with my friends, which made me feel very excited and connected to the world.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I only went online twice a week; however, now I need to go online every day to keep up with the latest news.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，且表达不够流畅。建议改进语法并使用连接词，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. When I was a child, I had my first social media account and wanted to chat with my friends every day, but my parents only allowed me to use the Internet on weekends.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够具体。建议改进语法，增加具体原因和细节。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes, because nowadays people need to use the Internet not only for work tasks but also to stay connected with friends, which makes it hard to reduce screen time.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议改进语法结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明没有互联网时的活动。

Ví dụ: If I didn't have the Internet, I would spend more time listening to vinyl records and reading paper books, which are my favorite offline activities.

× my parents only allowed me using the Internet at weekends.

✓ my parents only allowed me to use the Internet at weekends.

动词 allow 后面应接不定式 to do，而不是动名词 doing。这里应使用 'allowed me to use'。

× people need to using the Internet to deal with their working tasks or chat with their friends.

✓ people need to use the Internet to deal with their working tasks or chat with their friends.

动词 need 后面接不定式 to do，而不是动名词 doing。应改为 'need to use'。

× When I in my reality life, I often listen to the vinyl records or read the paper books.

✓ In my real life, I often listen to vinyl records or read paper books.

句子缺少动词，且表达不自然。应改为 'In my real life'，并去掉冠词 'the'。此外，'When I in my reality life' 结构错误，需改为完整句子。